Reviews for Give Me One Night
Nahau Moondust chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
While I'm glad the Inu brothers are getting along.
kittycatkrista7 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
xxoikilluoxx chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Imagin if kagome did disappear how would inuyasha take it and how would kagome take it and had the kids in her era and after a few years she did return with the twins
VP4444 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
great story i'm glad to have read it. bye!
Shadows In Straight Jackets chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
bouncy balls LOL That just made my day
KatiechanXoxoXSesshoukun chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Loved this new oneshot girl! I am so sorry it took me so long to get to it but life has been hectic!

Wind's Whispers chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Hey, loved the plot, loved the story but i wanna tell you something... add more emotion to the story please. the heartbreak over Kagome crying was good but its when the charactors talk.


You write/type- Inuyasha said: " I love you"

One with emotions- Inuyasha stared lovingly into Kagome's eyes and whispered softly, "I love you."

Example end.

See that? Add the people reactions into the story it adds flavour and makes it more realistic.

I hope you remember this~ Good luck in your writing~~
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
hahhaha that was hilarious hahaha i cant stop laughing hahah great job i jsut loved Sesshomaru!
K'haku chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Awesome! Like most of your stories, 'cause you know, aome of them are beyond awesome! Though I think you over did it with Sesshy laughing so much but nontheless, you did a great job :D
Elizabeth Roses chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
rug burn lol good one