Reviews for Together and Apart
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I wish it was longer
Char910tom chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Great Story
Sakura chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Wonderful. Hades is very sweet.
LadyRas chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
OMG! This story's wonderful! You should make more stories! Keep up the good work :D.
neverest chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
cute:o)
AreYouSirius-questionmark chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
how cute:D
ziandra chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Good good good good! Update soon please.
Catherineza chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
hehe so sweet hades is aweessooome
Umi chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
?

It left bits of my review out...

That was soooo cuteeeeeeeeee

I want a continuation too

RAISE YOUR HAND IF YOU WANT A CONTINUATION! *raises hand* COME ON PEOPLE RAISE YOUR HAND *makes everyone else raise their hand* OKEY DOKEY THEN IT'S UNANIMOUS CONTINUATION YAY

Lol, sorry but sometimes I just hate it when authors stop their stories, like when there are so many questions

PLEASE CONTINUE IT. YES DO IT UMI ORDERS YOU.

COME ON. I EVEN SAID PLEASE
Umi chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
:DDDDDDDDDD

That was sooooooooooooooo

:

(Lol I dont know what's wrong with me today)

GREAT JOBBBBBBBBB

:DDDDDDDDDDD

************ BOOM.
Persedes13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Awww!It's so great :D :D Love the story, Can it have a continuation? like how was it taking care of the baby and stuff like that :D
Calm-Waters chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Awwwhhh! I always wondered over "What happens if Persephonme got pregnant?" And guess what happened? I found this story and I was like "YESSS!" :D
IngloriousShosanna chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
i loved this so much :)

it was so sweet, so lovely and I love that you chose to write about Hades and Persephone, as they were my favourite myth when I was 8 years old.

Thanks also for making them in love, and having a happy-ish life, they have a beautiful baby!

You're a very good writer, this was engaging, had fantastic imagery, great pace, beautifully descriptive and just plain awesome :) congrats very much and I hope I can improve to this level :)

I hope you write more- I think you could really write some beautiful things about life with their little girl. :)

congrats and much love!