Reviews for Rise of the Champion
jster1983 chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
Remind me what are Champion and Leviathan again? More Superman clones?
jster1983 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
I will review in the hopes you update this story because I want to see how badly this one will blow up in Waller's face. I have nothing against her it's just that she never thinks through when it comes to Cadmus projects involving Genetic Experiments. You have to admit that's why the League is always cleaning up her messes. Also I would love to see how Luthor is getting punished for this.
anon chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I will always prefer villains who at least have a point and frighteningly may even be right about everyone being better off under their benevolent dictatorship (of course make education great so the common man does know what is best for him and his children's children and democratic republicanism can work) like Ra's al Ghul if the environment isn't brought into balance no matter the means or cost the future for the human race will be worse than any dystopian fiction and will lead to the extinction of the human race not through misadventure but suicide through stupidity or Lex Luthor who as he says if he was calling all the shots could end famine and cure cancer and he could his mind is capable of anything perhaps give everyone ultra high-tech non polluting technology and maybe even superpowers lead humanity and the rest of the universe to unimaginable glory remember Red Son he united all humanity and led us to a golden age that lasted millions of years

A lot of villains seem unaware that if they used their mind and/or other talents for legitimate business causes or the government could be far more profitable than any crime spree

Of course vigilantes can be sanctimonious hypocrites judging others and letting themselves go unscrutinized condemning others when they do the same thing for less reasons I think it is disgusting they don't share their scientific breakthroughs (of course inventors should be well compensated) with the scientific specifically medical community or their skills with law enforcement agencies far more good than beating up thugs and psychos fight crime at its source ignorance and poverty. I realize due to rarity and complexity mass production may not always be possible or at least cost effective and due to difficulty not all could take brutal training but a little bit could go a very, very long way. A hero doesn’t just save people a hero teaches the people to take care of themselves. The ability to think of future generation when calculating pragmatic utilitarianism is what separates us from the animals. The world is not the way it is because of thugs and psychopaths, corrupt businessmen/politicians (which contrary to fiction are the exception not the rule) but because most people are too stupid to know what is best for them the extreme left and extreme right get caught up in their ideals and refuse to acknowledge brutal facts of reality no real world understanding of the extreme complexities of politics, economics, technological logistics, and how they’re all interconnected in the long run. People want everything right here right now the whole world just handed to them on a silver platter think just by complaining something will happen without a tangible plan. Such a plan will require a lot of long, hard, boring work all day every day for generations.

I'm glad the government has Suicide Squad, Cadmus, Checkmate, the Elite, Amanda Waller, and the new female Spy Smasher, Cameron Chase I'd include the Secret Six but I think from now on even if they're not going to be full fledged villains they stood up to the worse villains and are pure mercenaries I think

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anonymous chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
wow, might you consider getting a beta? I didn't read it because it was all just one long paragraph. Don't mean to seam rude but, my eye-sight isn't the best and I really don't want it to get worse. You should remember that a new paragraph starts every time someone talks, and after they talk. Example:

Darkseid slammed his foot onto Champion's throat,

"You thought you could defeat me boy? Even Superman could not! I will enjoy destroying..."

Before he could finish...

Don't know if this is completely correct, but I'm no beta so yea. But the plot sounds good in your summary and I hope to read it soon when it's edited (I would've read it anyway, but as I have stated above, my eye-sight is already going).