Reviews for Pawn of the Stars
SilverGhost chapter 34 . 9/18/2015
Just one thing- you put Birchcloud's name in Slatestar's speech, when she's already in Starclan.
SilverGhost chapter 29 . 9/18/2015
Why must thee torture thy readers?! DAWNXSOOT HINT HINT!O.O
TD4Life chapter 25 . 9/18/2015
Thickfur! Dawnpaw!
SilverGhost chapter 20 . 9/18/2015
Greywing's my fav. Oh, and Sootpaw/Dawnpaw and Dawnpaw/Thickfur are my shippings so far.. AWESOME
SilverGhost chapter 17 . 9/18/2015
Confession: I ship Sootpaw and Dawnpaw crazy. T T
However, it seems it's not to be...,...(I'm literally stabbing the buttons)
COOKIEMONSTER chapter 16 . 9/18/2015
Ooh, next chapter!
SilverGhost chapter 2 . 9/18/2015
During the intros of stories, I always scout out for little sprinkles of hints and foreshadowing! So, shower this cupcake with sprinkles! Which makes no sense.
eravvi chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Soooo... This takes place in the future? Nice prologue, by the way... I don't ship Dovewing with Tigerheart but honesty the writing is good enough for me to ignore that
Guest chapter 7 . 2/10/2015
ElmXDawn 3

don't know that much about sootpaw's POV, so not sure.
skyheart chapter 7 . 2/10/2015
okay, so still think maybe a dark forest cat is using branchpaw.

also, was that a typo when it said branchpaw had amber eyes down towards the bottom? or is that the dark forest cat, and hie has amber eyes?
skyheart chapter 5 . 2/10/2015
oh *gasps* is he...will...?

don't tell me branchpaw's secretly a murderer? oh gosh...
skyheart chapter 4 . 2/10/2015
gosh, talk about prideful. geez!

oh, and...

skyheart chapter 3 . 2/10/2015
i'm pretty sure i know why she's acting like that.

ch 1: sootpaw was smelling the fox, thus causing dawnpaw to smell it.

ch 3: sootpaw was injured (probably from the fox) and she heard and felt him talking and his pain.
skyheart chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
i think it's great so far! in the books, i'm not sure if i like dovewing but how you portrayed her character makes her seem a lot better :D
pianodevotion chapter 12 . 12/24/2014
I'm guessing the dark forest are plotting with one cat from each clan (the apprentice who 'scented a patrol' on river pan territory os for the dark forest which is why he smiled when the warriors said that a battle may come
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