|Reviews for Achilles' Heel|
| zexydemyx66 chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
i like it. please write more.
| silverdigger chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I first read this on your other site, but I had trouble navigating there, so I'm glad to find it here again. I remember delighting in the authoritative characterizations, the quick exchanges and crossfire tangents, and most of all how it really felt like long-time friends disturbing nearby diners - how often my own family has done that! Very enjoyable conversation, and with just a touch of confused romance at the end, I remember thinking about this chapter for several months after reading.
| Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Lol, really good story
| Irish-Brigid chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
You know, vision and hearing being enhanced I can kinda see being justified by in-game evidence. I have yet to figure out why people assume smell is included in the enhancements, except for hilarious situations like this.
Seriously. Weapons-grade stinky foods. LOL
| kerapal bubbles chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
The fruit he's talking about in the beginning...is it a durian? those are NAASSTYY. And the description is similar... just wondering. :) This amused me greatly; Zack is love. XD
| Jason M. Lee chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Of course, Zack would be describing THAT fruit...