|Reviews for Just Be|
| Fire Storm Weaver chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I think this is an interesting poem in many ways. The thought behind it is deep even though the form is simple. The main discussion is clear through the repeated beginnings and the shift of thought’s between characters are subtle giving it some flow even when it lacks rhythm and steady form but it gives a clear thought of what the author had in mind and some of it sit’s with you. The sentence “He’ll be forever who he becomes” really captivated me. The only thing really needed to improve is the layout as it’s shown in the site but that is probably because of the irritating system in
All in all, good work, keep at it.