Reviews for Bring Me That Horizon
Abracadabra chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Ummm... Yeah... In your description. You've got mispelled words. Stollen is a cake thingy. A ship stollen; while it sounds tasty might turn some readers off because they will expect an unbeta-ed story with loads of errors.I
francis2 chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
I so applaud you for bringing Johnny Depp into this. Interesting case, I wonder who knew about this, and where the Pearl is. Danny is so himself here. And Steve is too. I guess there are a bunch of fainted females on the parking lot now, where he changed his clothes.

This is soooo funny! And the shot at how you can youtube everything from your phone in minutes is genius.
crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 3/2/2011
Ahh you didn't torture us you had a guest appearance from another fav of mine, Johnny Depp. I hope Johnny gives Danny the autograph but I'm sure he will, Johnny loves kids and is into family so I don't think he'll forget about Grace.

Loved the talk between Jerry and Danny about the show Jerry is thinking of and how Danny is a bit sarcastic about now Danny knows that Steve hides his weapons and clothes in the back of the was such a good chapter I really really enjoyed it. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 3/2/2011
Steve was great if in costume they could have filmed Danny at the end looking displeased and how Steve asked if that was a little over the Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 3/2/2011
That was funny the bantering. Danny pushing Steve until Steve admitted he had nothing. I loved Danny taking over and then hearing the noise. Steve taking off after the boat was so good and then Danny shaking his head now that Steve had an job. Sue
Effie17 chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
I really like the bickering going on with Danny and Steve. You have been writing it very well. I especially like the office scene a few chapters back with Danny locking himself in his office and Steve calling Danny a diva. Thank you.
francis2 chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
Wow, I guess the director will write this scene into the movie somewhere. That was really super Seal. I love this!
francis2 chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
Well, of course Steve would swim after them. I love this story, so funny. Write more!
ackeberlynn chapter 5 . 2/26/2011
"What?" Steve asked spinning around, but not seeing his partner.

"Psst, down here!" Danny hissed.

"What are you doing down there little fella?" Steve asked as he crouched down to be at Danny's level.

LMAO...GREAT stuff, there. :)
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 2/23/2011
I love those two fighting one minute and then everything is ok the next Gracie it took her to get Danny going again. I enjoyed the chapter and can't wait for more. Sue
francis2 chapter 4 . 2/22/2011
Those two are so funny together. I can see Steve breaking into Danny's office and laughed my ass off.
Allie1921 chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
Well,this started as a but of cheese, but you have a chance for a really great story! I'm looking forward to more!
francis2 chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
I love it. Don't tell me Jack Sparrow stole his ship back!

"Those are more guidelines then actual rules." Great line in this context!
francis2 chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Hahaha! Talk about your words coming to bite you!
francis2 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
OMG, this is an awesome start! You're spoofing the film industry while using another part of the industry to solve the case. Brilliant!
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