Omg, once I started to read this story, I couldn't stop until I finished. I need to know Arty and Holly's family are going to be alright. I need to know what happened to future!Holly and if she's going to stop being a berserk. I think I'm now attached to this broken family holding barely together with sibling love.

Regarding your writing's quality, I assure you I, as a reader, am not critical. You are not a professional writer and most likely not working with assistant. No need to apologize.

I don't if you have any plan to update this story, it's been while since the last update.

Alvayn

You still alive?if yes, moar plz?!

That's a pretty good story but how do you explain Artemis and Holly having more than one child?

More please:)

Please continue!

Please continue!

U cant stop finish story then right next one I actually went till3:45 in the morning to read but my mom caught me ... my hopes are riding on u

U cant stop now its awsome Im pleading with all my soul

HAHAHAHAHA! Great, glad to see you back! Don't worry about you writing. It's cool. I can't wait for the rest thank you very much!

It's so great to see this updated!
I loved that those two finally stopped being nervous teenagers, even though one is, about the issue.
I've been following this story for awhile now, and I still love it.
Thank you for updating!

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH THIS MADE MY DAY

This is AWESOME! You've done a really good job! I loved the plot and can't wait to see what comes next. :)

Bunny4eva2

I hope that you finish this sometime, because I'm really curious to see how it ends. I'm intrigued by the storyline and I like how you've woven it into the books themselves a little bit. And the Artemis/Holly is well done, and I love Temmy/Cerise.

Good story. Sadly, it has been abandoned.

Opal is one crazy woman!I love this so very much!
Fave quote this chapter: "If all else fails we will leave the explaining to you" It is just so perfectly Holly!

Nice Job!