Reviews for The Third Generation
Alvayn chapter 30 . 10/15/2018
Omg, once I started to read this story, I couldn't stop until I finished. I need to know Arty and Holly's family are going to be alright. I need to know what happened to future!Holly and if she's going to stop being a berserk. I think I'm now attached to this broken family holding barely together with sibling love.

Regarding your writing's quality, I assure you I, as a reader, am not critical. You are not a professional writer and most likely not working with assistant. No need to apologize.

I don't if you have any plan to update this story, it's been while since the last update.

EmberRoseTwisted chapter 30 . 6/24/2016
You still alive?if yes, moar plz?!
Th 1998 chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
That's a pretty good story but how do you explain Artemis and Holly having more than one child?
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 30 . 2/1/2015
More please:)
Guest chapter 30 . 11/20/2014
Please continue!
evanRi chapter 27 . 11/19/2014
Please continue!
Guest chapter 30 . 10/8/2014
U cant stop finish story then right next one I actually went till3:45 in the morning to read but my mom caught me ... my hopes are riding on u
Guest chapter 30 . 10/7/2014
U cant stop now its awsome Im pleading with all my soul
Tawny chapter 30 . 9/7/2014
HAHAHAHAHA! Great, glad to see you back! Don't worry about you writing. It's cool. I can't wait for the rest thank you very much!
LadyLazarus115 chapter 30 . 8/25/2014
It's so great to see this updated!
I loved that those two finally stopped being nervous teenagers, even though one is, about the issue.
I've been following this story for awhile now, and I still love it.
Thank you for updating!
Guest chapter 30 . 8/22/2014
Bunny4eva2 chapter 29 . 6/19/2014
This is AWESOME! You've done a really good job! I loved the plot and can't wait to see what comes next. :)

itsnotoveryetbewarned chapter 29 . 5/24/2014
I hope that you finish this sometime, because I'm really curious to see how it ends. I'm intrigued by the storyline and I like how you've woven it into the books themselves a little bit. And the Artemis/Holly is well done, and I love Temmy/Cerise.
Guest chapter 29 . 5/18/2014
Good story. Sadly, it has been abandoned.
Tawny chapter 29 . 3/3/2014
Opal is one crazy woman!I love this so very much!
Fave quote this chapter: "If all else fails we will leave the explaining to you" It is just so perfectly Holly!

Nice Job!
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