Reviews for The Third Generation |
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![]() ![]() OMG! i LOVE your story, Keep going... :) |
![]() ![]() Keep going! 'tis AWESOME! lurv it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been waiting for updates and i finally got it! Thank you very much! I just really love this story! Keep up the good work! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pardon the language... but this... this is fucking hilarious... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going! |
![]() ![]() I MISSED YOU! I want to read MORE! You punch that writers block right in the block! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. But try your best to update sooner. I keep losing track of the story. Maybe you should put up a summary sometime if you can |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, great story! but you need to work on your verb forms. it gets kinda confusing when you switch from present tense to past tense without any warning. i hope you keep writing because this is one of my favorite fanfics and it is a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have made me soooooooooooooooo happy thanks so much. I am glad that you can come back to us and write more of this amazing story thanks sooooooooooooooo much can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! The chapter was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but laugh at Minerva, and Holly's reactions. Minerva's is so funny. I really despise Minerva, HollyxArtemis is so much better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo. I really hate Opal right now, Foaly is awesome. Bad Mud Pixie. Really good suspense and twists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I'm so excited for the next issue! You're also good at making conflicts! I like it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() DO NOT FORGET ABOUT THIS STORY! PLEASE IT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter again! I enjoyed 100 per cent of the fanfic so far, no need to rewrite! Go on fic reviews for encouragement, on a walk for inspiration ;) |