Reviews for The Third Generation |
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![]() ![]() AMAZING STORY! Please keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() finnally got this read fell behind a little sorry i wonder i wonder wonderful chapter of course |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter again.. plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() Under the thin layer of gramatical mistakes that can easily be corrected, lies a great writing style, brilliant story and a huge potential. There are many readers of this story, but not all of them have enough currage or eloquence to review. By not quitting writting you made them - and the reviewers - more happy. Big salute from Serbia and keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY IS AMAZING! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON, BAD THINGS WILL HAPPEN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay an update! Like you said, there was a lot of grammar and punctuation errors. I also thought that the dialouge and storyline in general was kind of jumpy. You know? Very hood plot though! Can't wait to see what you write next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The adventures of Jacky Faber By: L. A. Meyer is a great series about sailing/pirates. Love the story by the way! |
![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Glad Your back. This is great story. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait for more. Haylie Myers |
![]() ![]() DON'T YOU DARE QUIT! Please... I love this so so much do you know how many chapter there will be? -T |
![]() ![]() One last attempt to get an update. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY LOVE THIS AND IT WAS GETTING TO A REAL GOOD BIT! Now I'm lost because I want to read this (reading the same chapters repeatedly gets boring ya know!) FFG please |
![]() ![]() YOU HAVE DISAPPEARED! COME BACK PLEASEEEEEEE! please ;] |
![]() ![]() Book about sailing and pirates: SAVOY by Celia Rees |
![]() ![]() Hey look I understand school is physical and mental torture often but DO NOT dump this story! . . .Story...pwease*kitten eyes* XxBW |
![]() ![]() Please hurry and continue! I love this it is riveting and Why did Holly leave in the future? A/H forever! Love all the characters! |