|Reviews for The Third Generation|
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/1/2012
AMAZING STORY! Please keep it up!
| 0000000000000101000 chapter 22 . 9/28/2012
finnally got this read fell behind a little sorry
i wonder i wonder
wonderful chapter of course
| ilovebks chapter 22 . 9/24/2012
awesome chapter again.. plz update soon!
| Anon chapter 22 . 9/23/2012
Under the thin layer of gramatical mistakes that can easily be corrected, lies a great writing style, brilliant story and a huge potential.
There are many readers of this story, but not all of them have enough currage or eloquence to review. By not quitting writting you made them - and the reviewers - more happy.
Big salute from Serbia and keep up the good work.
| Fawn the Enasni Soul chapter 22 . 9/16/2012
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON, BAD THINGS WILL HAPPEN!
| BookwormGirl16 chapter 22 . 9/10/2012
Yay an update! Like you said, there was a lot of grammar and punctuation errors. I also thought that the dialouge and storyline in general was kind of jumpy. You know? Very hood plot though! Can't wait to see what you write next!
| yelrac chapter 21 . 9/9/2012
The adventures of Jacky Faber By: L. A. Meyer is a great series about sailing/pirates. Love the story by the way!
| Sleekpelt chapter 4 . 9/7/2012
| Haylie Myers chapter 22 . 9/7/2012
Glad Your back. This is great story.
Keep up the amazing work.
Can't wait for more.
| Tawny chapter 22 . 9/6/2012
DON'T YOU DARE QUIT! Please...
I love this so so much do you know how many chapter there will be?
| FowlFanGirl chapter 21 . 8/14/2012
One last attempt to get an update.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY LOVE THIS AND IT WAS GETTING TO A REAL GOOD BIT! Now I'm lost because I want to read this (reading the same chapters repeatedly gets boring ya know!)
| FowlFanGirl chapter 21 . 8/9/2012
YOU HAVE DISAPPEARED! COME BACK PLEASEEEEEEE!
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/5/2012
Book about sailing and pirates: SAVOY by Celia Rees
| BookWormy chapter 21 . 7/18/2012
Hey look I understand school is physical and mental torture often but DO NOT dump this story!
. . .Story...pwease*kitten eyes*
| FowlFanGirl chapter 21 . 7/8/2012
Please hurry and continue! I love this it is riveting and Why did Holly leave in the future? A/H forever!
Love all the characters!