Reviews for The Third Generation
Haylie Myers chapter 5 . 7/7/2011
awesome chapter

keep up the good work

Haylie Myers
luthorsuper chapter 5 . 6/20/2011
This is really good! Please update soon :)
MissAuroraMarie chapter 5 . 6/19/2011
OMFG! You nees to Update! Im DYING To know what happens!
bookwormqueen7 chapter 5 . 6/19/2011
that is good. update soon please.
wayonee chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
This fic is very intriguing.

Who the heck is Artemis married to?

I hope it's Minerva.(dodges neutrino gun shots)

Anyways,keep it up!
cloudseeker6729 chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Hey, not bad for a long story. Okay do want an idea, so Opal manages to come back to the time of the Time Paradox (if you've read the book) and there are three Artimis' and three Opals and two Hollys and Butlers
Weatherlady chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Wow, keep going, it's awesome!
Lord Creator chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Wow. Nice begining, I saw what the summary said and I hope III is atremis and holly' s kid. Please continue! It is a good begining and look forward to more.(raises a glass of coke) stay thirsty my friend.

happywritingx chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
ooooohh i hope Artemis the III is Holly's...and who's Cerise? Please not the II's wife...

really good! please update soon!
mischievous101 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
:U Well don't just leave it there, continue it XDDD

wb Good plot.


Plus, your grammar is actually pretty good, unlike some eye-scorching fanfics around this site...

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