Reviews for The Third Generation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter keep up the good work Haylie Myers |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! You nees to Update! Im DYING To know what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is good. update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is very intriguing. Who the heck is Artemis married to? I hope it's Minerva.(dodges neutrino gun shots) Anyways,keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, not bad for a long story. Okay do want an idea, so Opal manages to come back to the time of the Time Paradox (if you've read the book) and there are three Artimis' and three Opals and two Hollys and Butlers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, keep going, it's awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Nice begining, I saw what the summary said and I hope III is atremis and holly' s kid. Please continue! It is a good begining and look forward to more.(raises a glass of coke) stay thirsty my friend. 47 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooohh i hope Artemis the III is Holly's...and who's Cerise? Please not the II's wife... really good! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :U Well don't just leave it there, continue it XDDD wb Good plot. OTL DUN LEAVE IT THERE, ME DEMAND MOREEEE~~~~ Plus, your grammar is actually pretty good, unlike some eye-scorching fanfics around this site... ~Bunnie |