Reviews for fragmented like glass
Hitomi Zotz chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
I really like your writing style, personally I always liked the idea of Schrader and Rhonda more, although she did leave him to die lol but yeah I thought Schrader and Macy had a thing too.
BackgroundRobot-11 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Very nice, I admit, there was some tension between them, although personally I never thought quite like the way you saw it.

Poor Sara...

Nice ending, you almost made me feel sorry for Macy.
SakuyaMikafan chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Glad someone else wrote such a story. i loved the macy/schrader chemistry. good job!
Me chapter 1 . 1/31/2011

"(But her lip gloss is smudging and he's tasting a lot like those peppermint sticks Sara carries around with her.)"


and this made my heart break.

"She turns to him, sun slanting into her eyes and blonde hair spilling over her tanned shoulder.


Just 'No'. No explanation. He doesn't push it.

But his heart fractures like glass."