|Reviews for On the Wings of a Dove|
| hotvampy7 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
let the kid grow up but uther than that i luv ! i just really felt like doin that
| greywolflove chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
great chapter, keep up the good work can't wait to read more.
| janjan2009 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Great story so far..but why the incest with Jane and Alec? Love that the Volturi are good in this story as well! Can't wait for more!
| Analitica chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
omg! that was so cute! i want to see more please
| SavageGraceX chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
I don't get Esme - what a nasty girl P
| lynne0731 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
| lynne0731 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
| goldfishie1 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Love it! Jasper is so sweet with his little princess. I love Peter bringing her a stuffed wombat. Really different for Esme not being maternal. I hate that witch of a mother. Thank God Charlie got Bella.
Can't wait for more!
| twimama77 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
| roon0 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Lovely update. Whose after Bella? She does have a lot of protectors. I am really enjoying this story very much.
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
I hate Rene! How can she be so powerful? They have to find her and Demetri can find anyone so why is he having a hard time with Rene? Also, is she human? Some man in forcing her to give him a bj and I just wonder is she human?
Poor little Bella has either an allergy or a cold. She is loved so much. Difficult to see Esme a bad mama. She is jealous.
Love this story please post soon.
| Sachmet chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Oh now i finaly make it to read your story!
and i love it! what is wrong with esme? will that change?
| mynxi chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Awww so cute. :)
| AbbeNormal chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Such a sweet story. Well, in some parts, some not so much. Its hard to read that abuse happens, even in a story. I didnt realize how common it really was until my huband and I became foster parents for the state of Indiana. It happened so much, I had to quit and retire early. I couldnt take it and seeing it. Its one thing to have a child come to your home because of abuse, its another they come back again and again and again because the state keeps giving them back!
Sorry, I'm jumping off my soap box! lol It really is an awesome story. I will be here to take the journey with you.
| VampairePrincess chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Add more I love it!