|Reviews for On the Wings of a Dove|
| Sonja Whitlock chapter 5 . 2/1/2012
This is a super fantasy type story. I just finished all five chapter. You even had my toes curling with images of Jasper. Hope you have time to post a new update soon.
| Tee Hill chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
great chapter :)))))))))
| girlcanwrite16 chapter 5 . 1/10/2012
I love this story! Please continue it soon!
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 5 . 1/9/2012
Great chapter! I love reading the Major :)
| MzPYT4eva chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
I cant wait to read more!
P. S. I love the MAJOR!
| TlynG chapter 5 . 1/7/2012
Yay! You updated! I'm so happy that you didn't forget about and stop this story its one of my favorites... And I can't wait to see what happends next and how the rest of the mating goes...
| NinaTree chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
I liked the foreshadowing in this one, you do a great job of hooking your readers for the next chapter! Can't wait :)
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
Oh come on...we have waited so long and now we end this chapter on a cliffie...no real lemon?
Please don't leave us hanging on. I can't wait for Jasper to make love to her. Major would not really be love but lust and sex but Jasper OMG I love him.
| gleek987 chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
please update soon! love the story :D
| T1nk3rB1tch chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
well now...it wasn't all out hot and claiming but its a start...can't wait for the next chapter. post again soon.
| TheLadyKT chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
| MonicaJ chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
Wow great chapter love the balance between Jasper and the Major can't wait for more so happy for the update on this story as well as the others
| GiselaWV chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
| Tillitryillneverknow chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
What can I say? It's sexy and deliciously tempting all at once. Knowing their past and on the cusp of their future... perfection! Not trying to be a nudge, but trust me when I tell you your fans NEED the rest of this mating soon. You have only yourself and your skill to blame! You have me squirming in my chair.
| Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 5 . 1/6/2012
Thank you for continuing!