This story was atrocious. It takes something special to ruin and utterly assassinate some of the best characters ever written in fiction. And thats the diff between such awful fanfic writers and publishes writers. Hermione Granger is one of the most powerful and brave female characters ever written. She is smart and wont take any crap from anyone. She single-handedly kept the trio alive. And you took such a magnificent character and turned her into a wimpy and mewling quim. You turned her into someone who lets people just use her and get away with it with no consequence. Not to mention how brainless and biopolar she is portrayed as. I am blown away by how terrible this story went as i read on. Sometimes i torture myself with such egregious works to process and assimilate as to what disgusting stuff is happening in such writer’s real lives to project such terrible characters and plot arcs on to a story. The way draco treated hermione and to make her constantly give in to him with the cliche af “body betrayal syndrome” was maddening. And i was right, draco was indeed given a sob story to justify his actions and give him and hermione the HEA. I am appalled at the incoherent writing and astonished at the dimwitted people who actually like such wattpady unoriginal stories and literally even re-read such trash. This is like a cheap tessa and hardin knock off. Every character is sooooo OOC that i cant even take anything seriously. I have rarely read hermione written soooo soooo badly. What in the actual seven hells is wrong with people?! Who writes such stuff without flinching at themselves. Introspect about what you wrote. This is sooo embarrassing. Ik its a free platform and you can express creativity, but damn, this is just plain dog sh*t. How can someone have no self-respect or integrity to write such an FMC in the 21st century. I have read some amazing dark draco fics where he and hermione are toxic. Its written so well that despite the toxic stuff, you root for dramione endgame which was NOT the case here. Its like an angsty teenager who has no idea what literature outside wattpad even looks like. Every single story by this writer has been a single blueprint— draco treats hermione like a doormat now he is in love with her miscommunication and other woman cheating and playboy tropes hermione is a dumb hoe who cant control her love for someone as worthless as draco coz she has been stripped off of any character and personality even when there are better prospects for her not to mention the disgusting virgin FMC and playboy MMC trope in this friggin modern time draco grovels a bit hermione takes her back after listening to his recycled sob stories. Its giving bella and edward. This story convinced me to stay on AO3read some actually well written stories and characters with some actual substance than waste my time here. Childish stories like these are great refreshers in the regard of reminding us how terrible writing is venerated by similarly airheaded audience. I am shocked at the people appreciating such BS. Do better! And if you are a woman who wrote this, then more shame on you for making hermione like this. Go back to the middle ages with such a pov. Stop writing altogether and take some time to get an idea about how actually concrete characters are written in this day and age. There are ways to write toxic and dark draco without adding such asinine tropes. The slut-shaming and terrible emphasis on hermione’s beauty over brains, goes on to show how much of a chauvinistic mindset you must have irl. This story ruined my entire mood. As a dramione fan, i pray that i dont come across such vapid and inane stories ever again. A truly ACRID story and writer.

I don’t think the flashbacks in the middle of conversations added much to the story. Talk of their appearance all the time made the story and the connection with the characters weaker. We get it Hermione is the most beautiful girl that was ever born and Draco is the most powerful. This might be an unpopular opinion but why were all the Slytherins so crappy. Theo went from creepy to insignificant. Even his dying was blah. I had wtf moment when the pedo relationship was included in the epilogue. Draco’s pack murdered, raped, destroyed. You are telling me there were no consequences for them after war. Hermione became tstl towards the end. The epilogue was again WTH, everyone became a big happy family so yay I guess.

The angst was great but I think the writing could be improved. Repetition of “so beautiful” was cringe and at one point made my head hurt. Slut, bitch, whore, princess- The girls lost all their agency during the story. They were there just to establish Draco’s playboy yet dangerous image. The whole story was just playing dolls with the characters. All of them lost their personality. The plot was a bit messy but I liked their childhood years. Later Draco became irredeemable and unlikable. Neither did I like him nor did I care about him. He was physically and emotionally abusive to his wife even in private. Forced teenage pregnancy was disgusting and in his letter he thought they could just ride into the sunset after all he did. I zoned out completely during the letter chapter. Hermione is so bloody beautiful she has no other thoughts except Draco. Girly wtf! Ik your life was messed up but you gave up so quickly. I think my main problem was the writing was more tell than show. What does Hermione do when Draco isn’t around?

I waited for a crawl, it didn't happen, I waited for a Hermione who was actually strong, it didn't happen, this is the first Dramione fanfic I'll abandon, I can't bear to see a cheater get along, and a stupid woman who just opens her legs.

I'm the only one feeling tremendous anger towards this sweet and annoying Hermione. I'm very uncomfortable with how Hermione's character was formed, I can't recognize her character here at all, the only thing about her is her name, but her bravery and courage and intelligence, all of that is gone, friendship with Harry, I hope the next ones are better

Yes, Draco can suffer for more than one chapter. Really, that girls has no dignity.

This is so so cute

Ouuuh she see something

I like this first chapter

UGHHH QUE RAIVA! HERMIONE PRECISA SAIR COM OUTRO CARA! ELA PRECISA ESQUECER DRACO! EU ESPERO QUE ELES NAO TERMINEM ESSA HISTÓRIA JUNTOS

vai ser muito dificil pra mim ler isso aqui se Hermione aceitar insultos calada :(

I’m sorry if I offended in the former chapter, I know how much the author worked for it, and you are so good at writing, I really love this story until this chapter, it’s just I can’t help but hate Draco in this story.

I know Hermione grew up trying to get others’ recognition, and I can totally understand she was eager to be loved and Draco was everything to her, so maybe she would depend on him so much. But from the chapters where she was at fourth year, we can see although she grew up in such an environment, she still became such a kind, principled girl who had brain, and she was even a feminist (which I’m so proud of her). If she was not like this in the former chapters, I won’t be so upset now.

I have read the author’s reply to one of the other comments, I’m sorry if comments like this upset you, but although Hermione depended on Draco, she was clearly aware that this kind of prejudice is wrong, so how could she keep loving him so helplessly when he was stupidly insistent on this crazy prejudice which aimed at killing people like her? Yes Hermione never experienced discrimination like this before, but shouldn’t she insist what she believed before, instead of begging for acceptances from people who have such vile ideas in her eyes? She could make friends easily if she wanted, so she didn’t have to seek for relying because of helplessness.

I have just finished chapter 23 and I already hope Hermione and Draco wouldn’t end up together. Hermione deserved so much better. And what a asshole Draco was. Honestly he was nearly an adult now, and people still keep forgiving him like he was just a bloody child. All the happiness and love were nothing just for his baffling stupid fucking prejudice. It surprised me when I read the comments that gave me some information about what was going to happen in the later chapters, and all I can say is wow people have such forgiveness for male characters.

And Hermione, such a principled and rebellious girl, making me love her so much in the former chapters, totally changed into this since she returned to her muggle family.

This was lovely. Thank you.

I freaking crying