Reviews for Midnight Sun
mortalinstrumentsfanfictiongal chapter 10 . 4/13/2014
CHM13 chapter 10 . 1/23/2013
What? How? Bdhskmc .cxsjdndjdbcj By the Angel, this is so enthralling
Quien la Escribe chapter 10 . 9/8/2012
I love this story, can't wait for the next update.
kiana.sweetheart chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
update please dont let him become a mundane:(
TheReader chapter 10 . 3/30/2012
ahhhh, im at the edge of my seat! please update soon!
dscythe1157 chapter 10 . 5/3/2011
i think it would be a good story if you take your time explaining every details. lack of details and action. the characters are a lil ooc, jace not being a cocky bastard himself and submissive, clary likewise. but hey this is your story so the character's attitude is up to you. but the whole story is lacking of details. improve and keep it up. :)
livvyy3emmyy chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
good first chapter lassss

cant wait to read more:)

D chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Constructive critisism - too instant and angry!
hawaiiangrl chapter 10 . 2/27/2011
what the hell! why?
Immortalrunes chapter 10 . 2/27/2011
Great chapter, alhough very sad update!
hawaiiangrl chapter 9 . 2/17/2011
sebasian/jonothon isnt dead yet!
Immortalrunes chapter 7 . 2/13/2011
Dramatic, can't wait for the next chapter
Katie. Ya chapter 2 . 2/13/2011
The characters are little too ooc, but they story line is okay. One thing really bothering me though is how in the book, clary and jace would be too proper to have a child before they got married. And please use commas, it's too many run ons with no commas.
Immortalrunes chapter 6 . 2/7/2011
Great chpt update soon
Joanne J chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I think this is quite good for a 1st fan fic. It may need a little bit of work.

Looking forward to your updates.

Much love Joanne ]
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