Reviews for Wild at Heart
story a day chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
I'm a bit gutted! Your story could be so good but it's too jumbled. You need to create a clear story structure and know who your talking about. You switch names ie jack and jacob. Some words are so wrong it's confusing, remember your tenses too. Also things such as hear, heard etc. Look forward to Reading your editted version. Hope this is constructive and doesn't offend. Xxx
Pianogirl05 chapter 10 . 8/28/2011
Great little story!
Pianogirl05 chapter 9 . 8/28/2011
Pianogirl05 chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
LOL! Great chapter.
Pianogirl05 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
So different than other stories. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
ilovebdt2012 chapter 8 . 6/14/2011
Wow I liked this short and sweet Md right to the point great job
ilovebdt2012 chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
Wow love this
emma holly cullen chapter 7 . 5/26/2011
love the story can't wait for the next up date.
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 7 . 5/26/2011
Interesting story. Though there could be more development in plot and narration. But over all, good job.
ddd chapter 4 . 4/10/2011
its jake not jack but good
lightbabe chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
This story is really good. I am really excited to see how the things develop in the story. The characters are really interesting and the way you capture there emotions is brill. Thanks
vivx-chan chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
It's different, lets see how it goes. ;P
Dani-1811 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Great story post more soon
vivx-chan chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
It's a bit confusing, but I hope I'll understand it later XD