|Reviews for Pure Revelations|
| lillianolivia.white chapter 42 . 5/14/2013
They are grooming Edward to take over for Aro because of his Botany background. Love how their relationship is progressing.
| lillianolivia.white chapter 40 . 5/14/2013
I wonder if Bella will mention this to Edward?
| lillianolivia.white chapter 39 . 5/14/2013
This chapter was adorable. I have never laughed so much as at Edwards internalizing. He is such a kid in love. Just adorable.
| lillianolivia.white chapter 38 . 5/13/2013
I see this as a huge scientific experiment using the human inhabitants as guinea pigs.
| lillianolivia.white chapter 37 . 5/13/2013
Big Mistake! Edward accepting Tanya's apology. She is just preparing her next stunt.
| Lillicat1 chapter 36 . 5/13/2013
Group Hug for ilovealion. Uh-oh. Bella, Edward, jasper, Rosalie or Alice will get locked in the Greenhouse when the CO2 lockdown occurs.
| Lillicat1 chapter 34 . 5/12/2013
Weber and Cheney give me the big time creeps. I hope that Bella can get some counseling before she drives Edward away, but I don't know how she can do so without alerting the powers at LaVerrot.
| Lillicat1 chapter 32 . 5/12/2013
Jasper has enough psychological knowledge to recognize Bella's symptoms of PTS over her rapr that has been suppressed for years. I just hope she can get Edward to understand.
Tanya is such a douche. She needs to be exposed for what she is.
| Lillicat1 chapter 31 . 5/12/2013
Edwards accidental "release" in class was hysterical. If E&B ever do make love, it will be a neucular explosion . The naming of Edwards penis the "phython" just cracks me up. When Alice said the" phython go your tongue ", Bella had no clue.
| Lillicat1 chapter 27 . 5/12/2013
How in the hell did Tanya follow Edward into the men's bathroom w/out being noticed?
| Lillicat1 chapter 25 . 5/12/2013
Note: FF will not allow me to log in , so that I can favorite , follow or alert your story. I know there are issues right now. Just wanted you to know.
What I don't understand, is how has Tanya managed to be sexually active when they are all watched so carefully?
| Lillicat chapter 24 . 5/12/2013
Ive always wished that the Tanya /Edward/Bella triangle was brought out more in the Saga, instead of beating the Edward/Bella/Jacob triangle to death. It gives the story more depth. Thanks for doing that.
| Lillicat1 chapter 23 . 5/12/2013
Love the closet mishap. That was priceless.
| Lillicat1 chapter 18 . 5/11/2013
The "python" is hysterical. What happened with Bella is she is allergic to the sunscreen . It's good that Edward was able to tell his Mom how he feels about Bella.
| Lillicat1 chapter 16 . 5/11/2013
Your story reminds me of the Flock , where laboratories existed to develop a cloned super race. Very interesting story. I am more ha ready for Bella & Edward to get together.