Absolutely beautiful story! Very eloquently written, the references to the past made me feel as if I were the one actually sitting on the beach reminiscing, and I loved the little interaction where Sasuke rescues Sakura from "the trampling crowd." Very sweet oneshot!

this was such a beautiful story, you write really well :)

and i love this song too!

Awwww its so adorable X3

I love the story :D

oh my god I love it, I wish I could write stories like you. I'm not good at writing stories so I stopped for a long while. Back to rhe book, I was sad when u mention the part when he left. Then I turned happy when u mention 'someone called her name.' By the way what's the name of the song?