|Reviews for Battle Royal Entry: Sancho|
| TheCrazyGirlYouWishYouNeverMet chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Yes! You have no idea how many Irken entries I've seen (even though you probably do) and your OC seems ... Well, awesome! Pudding...Now, I have a whole new appreciation for pudding.
Really though, your character should be increadibly interesting; can't wait to see where you take this.
Oh, yea, and you can take a cookie too, if you'd like :)
| ClockwerkOrange chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Felipe: "This hole... it was made for me!"
- Six months later -
Felipe: "Drr... drr... drr..."
Scientist: "S-sir! It's slowly coming this way!"
You might not get the reference.
I like where this is going. I hope my OCs aren't pitted against yours.
Until the finale. x_x
| Spartan Alpha chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Sancho here is an interesting character.
His past that revolves around his brother is disturbing. And somewhat more real than what other people go for sometimes. Like the ruthless Invader, shy like Irken and such to just plain insane people. On a plus from my note, his demeanor and character is that of one that is not properly used by people. While few can manage to pull it off, and give it a messed up background that isn't vague (or just plain stupid ) that gives the reader an impression on the character. Is not one to be treaded lightly.
I can imagin with technology in an invader Zim based earth, his kicks have to be strong enough to cause serious bludgeons. Can imagine crushing a few Irkens with a well placed stomp. And his knowledge on firearms and limited use of directed energy weapons (in the humans case on Invader Zim, lasers) may give him an extra edge should he salvage a fallen enemy weapon, and to use his as he pleases. And with his background as a satanist, I can also imagine him utilizing some gruesome tactics such as traps. Something that the aliens of Battle Royal have to be ready for. As they would have never faced off against a being like him :) I can't wait to see what damage he can deal.