Reviews for An Unpleasant Surprise
Dragoguage chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
go for it! was laughing the whole time
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
LMFAO! I was lying on my back reading this on my DSi XL and I was laughing like a friggin hyena and kicking at the air! My mom was pretty sure I was Having a seizure, lol :]
Raven Black The Marauderette chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Roflmao! I never fully laugh only chuckle or giggle this made me legit DIE LAUGHING! I fell of my bed XD lmaooooo
Raven Black The Marauderette chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Roflmao! I never fully laugh only chuckle or giggle this made me legit DIE LAUGHING! I fell of my bed XD lmaooooo
icecreamandcandies chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
update please :) i like this story
manic the hedgehog chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
haha this was great! when i read it i burst into a rather loud laughing fit when i read the 'why am i always a bloody virgin' bit, i was in the van with my dad at the time and he gave me a really funny lok and asked me if i wanted to tell him what was so funny which only made me laugh more... XD

good work ]
VIXXY VAMPIRE chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
this was pretty good, you should write more as long as you don't write a Matt/Jeff slash/incest *shudder* those are so wrong lol. Next chapter maybe have Jeff talk to Randy or John Cena and let them know how many Centon stories there are
SaneFangirl chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I love reading the "characters discover their fandom" fics. I definitely think that you should do more of these. There's nothing like a good parody to brighten my day.
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I had the BEST time reading this!

LOVE the details with Jeff always bottoming. I LOVED it. You're really good, you should work on some more fics, :)

One little thing though, Jeff's full name is spelled; "Jeffrey" Other than that, well done!