I hope you still write I've liked all these storys you have posted and would like some to be finished up someday

I loved this so mush it was amazing

But I’m sad because I don’t think this will get any more chapters

I hope the author is doing well

Thank you for the story. I enjoy it. Naruto is so Cool.

Naruto killed Bin Laden?! peak storytelling

Pretty great so far, keep it up

Your Newest challenger and Great clan days stories are really good, so far ch1 of this is nice. Looking like the rest of it will be too, I got high hopes

Wait so instead of protecting the city kurosaki is for some reason at soul society? They have 13 captains for what?

This is so not who naruto is, this is honestly cringe and too cheesy for my taste in a bit too overdramatic when it comes to his dialogue like shut up naruto

Noice

no... just no. This feels just so forced to get him closer to ichigo its not even funny, or good for the matter.

Oh also I know this is an old fic and you've grown a lot as a writer since you made it but I read it now. Also I like ranting about stories so I can use it to both further learn and to help others learn. If I ever come across as an ass, know that I'm not normally malicious(unless it's about RWBY 4-9) even if I were abrasive in my criticisms.

Sorry to be a shit but I'll be a shit. Rule number 1 of writing: NEVER break the internal logic of your story! If you wanted to use a weak Naruto than make him a cripple, don't set him up to be his STRONGEST incarnation then have him be weaker than his 19 y/o self. Naruto had enough chakra to power an entire army at 16, fight a goddess for days at 17, blow up the moon when he was 19(?), and then in his 30s his chakra was so expensive that it was pushing on the very seems of the universe. Yet after what should be at least ten millennium he ran out of chakra from(even if for three days) sparring. This on top of Naruto doing nothing of value in a fanfiction where he is the main character are to say the least, major flaws... Again if you want a weaker Naruto either use a younger version of him or literally just cripple him, it could make a very compelling story as long as you don't brush past it. As a side note: Using 13 y/o Naruto instead of of 17 in a setting where the main cast is older actually sounds VERY interesting since no one does that because they want to ship him.

This is an excellent story, can you please continue this soon?

Gaara:" I swear she was an adult just seconds ago."

So naruto has been nerfed into the ground, through the crust and mantle, through the core and back outside of the planet and into space. "not be a naruto super-fic" is right, holy shit. He's biologically immortal and has lived thousands of years being a jinchuriki. the amount of yang or yin chakra(both of which grow IN TIME AND WITH EXPERIENCES!) would be enough to shatter fucking planets dbz style. Then you didn't let him mature at all, somehow make him slower than yoruichi(with fuckin swift release in use?) and gave him the rinnegan and he gets a nosebleed from using it? I have no words to express my disdain and disappointment