|Reviews for A New Start|
| Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahah chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Please you're the only one who can save me (sobsob)
It's so greaaat buaabuabuabauaa!
| Kyuu Mikorina chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
this is cute! i'm going to do an Ouran Crossover with this! You inspired me, thanks!
| Anaximander Rose chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
It's really good so far. I really don't see any problems with it. But, maybe put a little more detail into your writing? Like, what did their voice sound like? What's their facial expression? What did the surroundings look like? You don't have to do that all the time, just occasionally. Detail keeps the reader interested, and keeps them from getting bored with your story. After all, that's an author's main goal, correct?
But, I did find any Grammatical errors, or punctuation errors, so you've actually done pretty good.
I'm not really one for crossovers, but this one seemed to peek my interest. So, please, update when you can! I'd really love to read more C:
| Starfool chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I like it so far, but one question; Why the cat ears and tails?
| SourPeanutz chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
i like it so far, please write more :D i cant wait till the Do-It-All club is back. xD