|Reviews for Pokemon Heroes: Uprising|
| The Gray Dragon chapter 30 . 8/7/2013
Yay! I actually found time to read!
Anyways, I have one question that we all must be thinking. Why didn't Pidgeot kill Ash! I was so looking forward to that! That would have been a great ending to the story! "Pidgeot beheaded Ash with an Aerial Ace. The end."
Kellyn, can't wait to see him come into the story.
I feel this was a fluff chapter, letting all the characters meet and reconcile. Although the last part has me intrigued as to what will happen.
You get a 5 out of pie for this chapter.
| Starlighz chapter 30 . 7/29/2013
I have a few questions regarding this chapter:
Will Epsilon, Mew, and Mewtwo have something to do with the outcome of the story?
Besides being of the same species, do Zetta and Epsilon have any connections outside of the UAAF and other Earth related incidents? Or are they the same being?
WHENS ZANDER COMING BACK? D:
Oh and um... would I be able to submit an OC? I will understand if it is either too late or you do not take OC submissions.
Oh yea, pretty darn good chapter! Again, I don't have any advice regarding this since I have considerably less experience with writing.
| MegaAuthor chapter 30 . 7/28/2013
This is going to be a short review, as I am giving you a review during my office break. It's good that you land yourself a firm job, and hopefully finish what you started before you start flipping the table.
I'm ashamed of you Ash, forgetting Pidgeot like that after you release her for five or so years. I'm actually glad the former Pokemon is beating you. Makes me warm and fuzzy all of a sudden. Latias however didn't share my view, since she believe that the Pidgeot is hostile, and even if she learn that the Pidgeot formerly belongs to Ash, she still attempt to defend him. I guess Latias never felt being left out befo- wait, wait, wait. Ash did '"sort of'" forgot about Latias up until the Charizard Valley. No excuse Latias; you should be strict to Ash, no matter how adorable he is! That is unacceptable!
Moving on - not focusing on the whole "Ash is now a Pokemon Hybrid thingy... Sort of" and "Ash is the Chosen One" and what not, because at this point it is a no brainer moment - We see Typhlosion recovering from his nasty battle. He won't be battling for a while as such as I can figure, being just heal and such. Is Leon getting sentimental on Jimmy again? His a soldier for god sake, no matter how low rank he maybe. But I guess I can't make a valid argument; he is being a shadow towards his most famous brother.
And speaking of his more famous brother...
Kellyn called - Leon scream and toss his communicator to bits, and yet it still calls! Oh the horror! - Leon's older brother call for a brotherly call, and so on and so forth. I didn't see anything major on this, other than to break or divert the people's attention from Ash and the group and telling a backstory on both front of the situation. Nothing too deep to swallow, I guess. As fir Kellyn owning a Darkrai, I'm not impressed. Raine's Spiritomb is more than a match for the Dark type Legendary.
Spiritomb: EHEHEHEHE... YOU GAVE ME TOO MUCH CREDIT, MEGAAUTHOR...
As the chapter moves on, we see Latios is now concern about leaving his sister on the hands of Ash, since it is clearly a bad idea, but not to disappoint her deity love story, Latios is fine by her commitment. I'm very convince that Latios is fine; with the motherly figure of Pidgeot, the tiny, electrical 'brother' Pikachu and 'Belle' wannabe legendary Pokemon Latias around Ash, what could go wrong?
Lance: That Legendary Pokemon is mine.
Well... That kinda ruin the fun. Have fun Ash.
We then swift our entire view to New Island, home of the most powerful, Gen 1 Pokemon of all; Mewtwo. He has deep concern of the young heroes and already foresaw the enemy's growth, and yet Mew, the Legendary Genetic Pokemon goes all 'Don't Worry, Be Happy' moment... I can't watch how the outcome turns out... I just can't. Deoxy, the DNA Legendary Pokemon appears, bearing the name Epsilon telling Mewtwo, who I suppose become mutual friends due to both of their sinful past, are concern of the people on Earth and are ready to take matters in their own hand.
This chapter is slow, but outstanding. It manage to grab my attention despite a slow story progress. I won't add anything negative here since you have been too busy with work, so I understand. I give this fanfic a stable 8/10.
Still waiting for Raine to introduce Spiritomb to Ash, who he defeated the evil Forbidden Pokemon back in Sinnoh. You better keep your promise Soldier, or I'll send Spiritomb in your dreams.
| Dustchu chapter 30 . 7/28/2013
Yet another UBERAWEPICDARY chapter. and I was a bit scared when Pidgeot attacked Ash, didn't want their friendship ruined forever. but they made up and now Pidgeot is back on the team. awesome!
And another mention of the famous trainer Red, seriously. he would make an awesome addition to the story but I won't be one of those people that complain and complain about in every review until it happens. I ain't like that.
And everybody is going to go their separate ways. that blows but they all have their things they have to do.
Epsilon? where that come from? not hating the name just wondering.
And Mewtwo... Slightly frightened? O_o
oh and I have a question for you, could you PM me about it? don't need to, just curious about something is all. its not that important.
Anyways. great work on this chapter, awesome work and amazing writing as per usual my friend. keep it up and don't stop being awesome. :) till next time! :D I'm Dustchu! :D :D :D this was worth the wait! :D
| CDR2Magi chapter 30 . 7/28/2013
Another great chapter! Can't wait to see where this goes next!
| CDR2Magi chapter 29 . 7/20/2013
This is just one of the best fanfictions that I have read on this site. Thank you for this!
| The Gray Dragon chapter 29 . 5/19/2013
...over a year? I DEMAND THE NEXT RELEASE NOW! XD
Oh, I can't wait to read what Latios has to tell Ashy. Wonder if it involves his Pigeot that he ditched,
Aww, Pikachu and Umbreon are going to be a good couple!
Sorry for late review, I have my finals tomorrow and Tuesday, then I'm out for the summer.
Overall, great job, even though there was a lack of action.
| shadowrallen chapter 29 . 5/19/2013
I saw the little Fullmetal Alchemist reference there (Lieutenant Havoc). And Pikachu X Umbreon was hilarious. Keep up the good work! ;)
| MegaAuthor chapter 29 . 5/19/2013
Ah, another chapter! …That was WAAAY too long for a wait. Hmm… I blame the flying spaghetti monster for that one… Hmm…
Right, down with the review.
For the first time, seeing a slow pace fic from the follow-up of the previous chapter, it is very enjoyable seeing our hero having some sense of peace and tranquillity. It was the first time when I said to myself, ‘what do you know, a slow pace fic which I can actually enjoy’. I don’t know why, I just felt that it was right. You are either getting good at what you’re doing in experience from your last slow pace story telling or you hired another writer to write this chapter up that manage to captivate me. Please tell me it’s the former rather than the latter, because if it isn’t, you are not honest my dear friend.
Haha, I like how Umbeon and Pikachu crazy relationship from the start of the story; Pikachu wins himself a ton of Pokémon before and he still has fear for Umbeon while the Dark-type Eevee Pokémon continue to pester the lightning mouse for a battle to the death, even when Umbeon clearly has a chance to win since Pikachu is totally exhausted. Even when Pikachu is back to full health, he still runs away from Umbeon in great fear. And Umbeon is a girl too! What a strange and interesting connection they both have, especially when Umbeon not only threaten the little rodent Pokémon, she also attempt to captivate him! I love to see you expanding this relationship more than seeing Ash and Latios again!
The other teams like Brock, Leon, Jimmy, Latias, Bianca, Blade, Raine also did a (minor) good job at this fic. Hehe, especially Brock, who is obviously suffered from a leg injury earlier before suddenly jump out from his bed to charm Nurse Joy! That, ladies and gentlemen is a truly desperate men wanting to have a relationship with a women. Extra laughs goes to his fighting/poison Pokémon Croagunk and his method of preventing his trainer of getting any girls XD. And as for Jimmy/Krakatoa, I bet he’ll be okay; a broken rib or two will not kill him after all. That, and a few nasty shots of Full Restore, Rare Candy and Protein pill should do the trick! *proceed to pull out a freakingly huge syringe*
Oh gee, Nurse Joy is not surprise about a talking Pokémon, in speech or in telepathically, I wonder whose fault is that? *stares at Raine Reddins*
Then we have another Twilight rip-off scene staring the dimwit Ash and the legendary Pokémon Latios! Sign… Poke shipping at its finest pokefans, so hate me all you want; it’s a Twilight rip-off. #Dealwithit
Gary ‘Mutherfekin’ Oak spill the beans telling Ash that he already knows about the UAAF true allegiance, which Ash Ketchum had no clue throughout the entire series before meeting with Leon… I wanted to either high five Gary or slapping at Ash at how much he misses with current political event. Maybe I’ll do it both. *Proceed to high-five Gary and deliver a single slap at Ash with one go* Ah! I feel better already!
Leon will survive… Err… Okay… nothing much to say about that, so yay to the OC! …what? I support Leon than Ash much? Well, Leon has a better character development than Ash is, now buzz off Pokefreak!
Really Blade? Umbeon and Pikachu’s rivalry is fiercer than your own? *Stare at Raine Reddins* Raine! What did I tell you about sharing that Rare Candy!? EV Training! Just because you earn so many pokecredit that doesn’t mean you can spoil it all on your Pokémon!
Well, at least we now know that the story end with by not being lame or boring. This chapter compliment its well written and yet slow, character developing section just as much as it was fast-pace and battle raging from the previous chapter. Don’t take this offensively Soldier, I like this chapter! And I have no negative aspect for this chapter either! Well-written slow pace story with interesting twist of character development with a hint of rivalry/romance is always good fun! …oh, and Twilight rip-off bull.
Ranking system: 8.1/10
| Dustchu chapter 29 . 5/18/2013
WOOOOOHOOOOO! ANOTHER AWEPICDARY CHAPTER! :D:D:D:D been waiting for this for a while! and you did not disappoint my friend. this chapter was AWEPICDARY! Glad to see everybody is all right, got a bit worried. and Bianca is wearing jeans? love to see that. :D and I wonder how Ash will react when he finds out that Pidgeot is his old friend from years past. I AM LOVING THIS! :D :D :D and Pikachu and Umbreon, I ship. keep up the really AWEPICDARY work on this, can't wait for the next chapter :D:D:D AWEPICDARY!
| Ardtornismyname chapter 29 . 5/18/2013
Also I noticed that you took some ideas from ARCEUS-master's fanfic
Is Arceus ever going to make an appearance in this fanfic?
| Tyber Zahn chapter 29 . 5/18/2013
Even more epicness, although it's no surprise. I've come to expect this quality from your writing. Given that, I really don't mind waiting for the next update, since the wait is always worth it.
| Starlighz chapter 29 . 5/18/2013
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what Pigeot does about her situation next update! I really don't have any advice, sorry. I just don't have the eye for those kinds of things.
| Kuro no Saisei chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Idea seems interesting, will read the rest :P
| Kuro no Saisei chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
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