Reviews for Cum Cum Under My Shower!
Constant-state-of-chagrin-93 chapter 1 . 4/7
You are one of my favorite NaruHina fan-fic writers and I demand for another chapter be made of this! Its even inspired me to write my own fictions :) I hope that you are still writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Ah! This is one of the hottest blow job fics I've read in a while! Most are rushy, I'm glad you used their personalities to make it personal and intense
LotusMundane chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
This was amahzing! Not your typical smut, which is great! I loved it.
EveJ Hina chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
HOT
onlytoask chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Never thought a blowjob story could be so good.
JadedGothButterfly chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Hot dayyum! So frikkin' HOT.
leiaah chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
oh my my. that was really good.
icecatfire chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
WEARS THE SEQUEL? TT-TT
Cloud Envy Shikamaru chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Oh, sweet ramen bowls! Lmfao! The funniest thing I've heard/read all day! Lmfao! Ouch! My side!

Nice job!
summer-r0mance chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
hahaha, "sweet ramen bowls" ) very steamy - sequel for Hinata in the bedroom? P
StrawburryIchigo chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
need to finish!
traceurcodie chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
are you going to make a second one of this, i think itd be a great idea would love to read
nahia2008 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I loved this story it was so awesome and sexy

i loved how Hinata came out of her shell
nahia2008 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This was freakin awesome and sexy I loved it
lightningpelt chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
holy... merciful... cake...!

that was amazing. arousing and amazing. so flipping hot oh my cake...! *still recovering*

turning to the actual review...

the characterization was actually really good. I can see Hinata doing this after she gets comfortable with Naruto, and Naruto himself was perfectly in character. xD It wasn't completely plot-less, long enough to satisfy but not long enough to get monotonous. (the ramen bowls were a nice touch, lol)

All in all very nicely done!
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