|Reviews for Going Under|
| Silverstarfox chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
that was some fight but axel is going to get put back down in the hole. this story is great I like reading so please update soon.
| Ewonsama chapter 11 . 12/17/2012
hello i'm new to this story, please dont let this story go unfinished, i would really like to know whats going to happen from here all the way to the end
| punkichan911 chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
I really love this story, great plot and character development! I'm excited for the next chapter!
| CreeepyFangirl chapter 11 . 12/13/2012
That is a good story. I like how Axel only spoke Norwegian when he came out! And I like how Roxy is such a frickin angel, but still in prison and dating the ultimate bad boy Axel! I like Roxys answers in the 'game' they are mostly so sweet and hopefull, they really reflect his innocence. But then he sometimes aanswers something dark or morbid. Like when Vexen said " Torture" Roxy said "Bliss" those little 'slip-ups' really seal it for me. Plus you just left us woth a plot-twist/cliffhanger combo! You HAVE to update now. I homestly don't care if you only update this 2 or 3 times a year. At least you wouldn't leave us hanging. That is just super rude and annoying. Great story! Keep writting on!
| ReinaKitty chapter 11 . 12/10/2012
Pleaseeeeeee write more!
I wanna know what happens next! :D
| Vamaisa.Raptor97 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
aww, how sad.
| daota1 chapter 11 . 12/10/2012
loved it so far but please please update soon
| KingdomHearts-Love chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
I really like this story!
Poor Axel! :'(
I look forward to the next chapter! :D
| Tranquillity's Chaos chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
I can't remember if I've ever said this to you, and if I have, ignore me, but I LOVE YOUR PEN-NAME :D
| memwwms chapter 10 . 4/28/2012
ZEXY he's so cute :D
| P5hng-Me-A'Wy chapter 10 . 4/27/2012
Aw this was such a cute chapter. I loved it. I am so glad that Zexion finally got his love returned.
| KingdomHearts-Love chapter 9 . 1/10/2012
Awwwwwww poor Roxy! Why does everything happen to him! Please continue! XD
| ReliveTheGreat chapter 9 . 12/17/2011
So this story i awesome :D update soon!
| P5hng-Me-A'Wy chapter 9 . 12/14/2011
oh poor Roxas... i hope Axel comes back soon and kicks Riku's ass for what he did.
| Ruby1056 chapter 8 . 10/3/2011
Please post more soon :) this story is cool!