Reviews for Kevlar
janesbiotch chapter 4 . 9/29/2012
i loved this. it was so in character. i mean he was shot but he was not taking it seriously at all. i loved this. only wish it could have somehow been longer.
Measer chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
Great story! I love the last line.
Measer chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
Great story! I love the last line.
IntoDarkness chapter 4 . 3/29/2011
Awesome story!
fwennie chapter 4 . 2/23/2011
Absolutely brilliant, I loved every word. The characters were perfect and I loved the comment about swimming - just perfect. Your story had me smiling with pleasure from beginning to end, very very well done.

Wendy
BreakerAlphaFoxtrot chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
ahhhhhhhhhyaaaaaaaay! XD love this story sooooo much! :)wow you sum up the characters really well and i can imagine this being a real episode! well done! XD
information specialist chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
This was ab interesting, and I really liked the banter in the last chap.
xanderseye chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
Brilliant, loved the ending. Looking forward to reading more fics from you.
Mentalgal chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
I liked that a lot, and I liked the way you finished it, with the, "Bullet woulnds are not only extremely painful, but very inconvenient." LOL Great job!
TheMentalistGirl chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
I love this story! I love it! xD
lilawonder chapter 4 . 2/11/2011
Great ending! I look forward to reading more of your work.
xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
ooh this is awesome! Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Mentalgal chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
LOL I love this! It's funny how you got Jane exactly right. I mean, he wouldn't take it seriously!
Smnbkr chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
That is pretty intense.
MissDonniex chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
love the story so far, great writing...
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