|Reviews for Take This Key|
| starflashed chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
can i just say that this is probably one of the most interesting takes on sora's character that i've ever seen? because it is. really. i'm pretty much speechless after this.
amazing, amazing piece, though. it's so crazy to picture this happening and yet, at the same time, it makes so much SENSE. talk about identity crisis! love your characterizations all around- but especially sora, possibly because i have a thing for seeing his darker side explored. you handled it so well, too. i can't... i don't even know how to explain what it is i'm trying to say, but just... yeah. it's like you got into his head, better than i've ever seen somebody get into his head before. and it's awesome, because- when you really think about it- the poor kid WOULD be messed up after all that, all things considered. best of all, though, i love how you had him keep his sense of optimism throughout most of it, up until the very end. and then the thing with ven- that would totally happen, if this whole piece were to happen- and i'm rambling now but i just wanted to let you know how amazing this was. the writing flowed so well, too. everything was perfect.
favoriting this 3
| kingdomdisney chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Oh. Em. Gee. I have the feeling I am going to read this every. Freaking. Day.
| Some Random Person chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I felt Sora, I WAS Sora. I've hardly ever seen writing like this!
it was all brilliant! 9000/20
| Ironic-Sarcasm chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
That was... intense. o.o
| ejaire chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I absolutely love this! I love your writing style. I find it amazing how everyone's in character, how you handled the flow of the story, everything! Really amazing!
| Darkmoon Fleur chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Wow your story is amazing! I really love your style. I like your take on the whole Sora-Ventus-Vanitas thing. Vanitas was creepy bu very in character. I feel so sorry for Sora when he had to listen to his taunting. Though the story was sometimes confusing, I still loved it, after all KH *is* confusing! Great job on this one shot!
| TsubasaWitch chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
This was wow, i don't know what to say really it was really interesting. I've never really thought about the connection between the two of them. To be something like this honestly, it gives me alot to think about.
Sora and Ven really are alike in many ways but I don't think that. I could just see him as a copy of Ven never.
Since Sora was around first and everything anyhow. The story was really detailed and everything people were in character.
most likey the best KH one-shot, I've ever read wont forget this anytime soon.
| Blue Deity chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Wow Starling, makes me wish I knew what was going on :P
Still I can tell this is very deep and of course, really well written.
| chocollatte chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Very lovely and so in character
| EverySnowflakeUnique chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
WHAT? NO I am NOT! (do not listen to the line up there. It speaks utter nonsense.)
Wow. Just, wow. This is AWESOME!
| AnimatedRosie chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I love this. I have no words fir how much I love it, I just DO. I was entranced while reading it. I could picture everything perfectly. Every word just flowed, and it was like I was watching the game's cutscenes. Fics like this one, imho, are the best kind.
Well actually I guess I DO have words for how much I love it. Huh.
Thank you for distracting me from the real world with this bit of magic. _
| Flightfoot chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I was thinking that throughout the latter half of the story that even if Sora lost the ability to wield THAT keyblade, he is able to wield a keyblade. All he needed was someone to perform the keyblade ceremony on him. This was really good, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
| Kiryn chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
This story is awesome, though slightly confusing at times. And did Roxas ever talk to Sora too in his mind? I didn't get Roxas's place in all this, or if he ever had one.
Poor Sora, though. And you actually made me think of the whole Ven-Sora thing in a way I never have before. I mean, you're right-Ven's been inside of Sora since he was 4 years old. How much has that affected him? And it must have some kind of impact on Sora when Ven leaves.
Imagine though if all the people inside him did talk to Sora in the games. He'd have Ven, Vanitas, Roxas, and Xion. I mean, Jesus. Poor guy.
Anyway, fantastic job. I don't review a lot, but I decided to give this story some love, since it didn't have any reviews yet. I'll be checking into your other stuff. Happy writing!