|Reviews for Given Up|
| Stereotypical Angel chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Oh God, I'm crying, shit, where's the tissue?
This is so good, and you say your old fics are bad... o.O My mum's giving me weird looks now, haha, but it was totally worth it, so saaaad! (
| Cina1325 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
oh my god
| Zach of death chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
| Rasengan 918 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
So sad and sweet
| 90MLLu chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Hey SaturnXK. I found you through Midnight Insomniac's story 'The Unwritten Rules of Espionage'. Funny that your first Naruto fic is about Gaara too and it's very similar to mine as well. Well, Sort of...
I got to tell you this. Your little one-shot about Gaara was abosultely sad and heartbreaking. It always pains me when I read something about Gaara's childhood. Furthermore not only is this heartbreaking and sad, it also has a lot of emotion. This sentence was very deep:
- Though not always, wounds of the heart can be healed. It just takes a little recognition, a little love, just like Yashamaru had told him. Although he had tried to kill Gaara, Gaara still remembered what his uncle had told him about the wounds of the heart. -
I like that. That was some nice writing. The plot of your story is amazing as well, having Gaara remember the painful things. Also I really think you got Gaara's personality through the flashbacks. You have really written a magnificent story
Overall an amazing one-shot! WELL DONE(v)
ps. if you don't mind would you perhaps check out my one-shot about Gaara. It's called 'Childhood Memoirs'. I would really like to hear your opinion about it since you have written this and like Gaara. But I understand if you don't want to
| Sakifan595 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
DUDETTE I LOVE UR STORIES this one was so good i love the way that u put so many ajectives into it you go gurl. BTW i still have to read some of ur other stories...now r u happy ive finally reviewed one of ur stories satisfyed
| StormWolf77 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I looooooooooooooooooooved it! So cute! Or, i should say sad... Shouldn't the people respect him if he's the kagekaze, though?
| Yukimi sama chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I look this story lol. It was like stuck in loneliness and depression. I liked how u incoorpersted...like all his emotions too. And then how he was happy at he end was nice too! Great Job! :p