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bbmassey88 chapter 46 . 4/3
OMG! The best Jasper Bella story I have ever read! Once I found this story, I started reading and couldn’t put it down!
WalkerWriter chapter 1 . 1/26
wow, i read this in one go! i love how you made bella grow as a human, with a very realistic mind set and so on. That change made her perfect for The Major.
Brightness Freya chapter 46 . 1/7
I love this story SO MUCH. Thank you for writing!
LadySixx chapter 46 . 12/15/2020
Such a fantastic story you wrote well done
celajwhitney chapter 27 . 12/2/2020
Edward is really going to get his skinny ass kicked when he gets back. the jury is still out on Emmett the dumb ass.
Luscious'Golden'Locks chapter 46 . 10/22/2020
I’m crying... my heart hurt so much when I read that you killed him but now I’m just crying because it was SUCH a good book! One of the best I’ve ever read, hands down. I absolutely loved every single thing about this book. I wouldn’t change a thing. From little hells bells the newborn and her lil tantrums and tendency to not listen to Jasper and his count and his major persona and his marking her and every single strand of hair on his head. I love their relationship, the way you write them together is so beautiful and heart wrenching and I miss it already. Thank you for writing this and sharing it. I will treasure it forever 3
LdyJulanna chapter 1 . 10/20/2020
I loved this! for so many reasons but you had me ready to bawl...
amber.dyce chapter 1 . 7/3/2020
wow that was a powerful first chapter... I have never stumbled across your stories before and plan to read them all.
Emo4 chapter 46 . 6/17/2020
I really like this story. thanks for sharing. did you write a sequel? I'll have to look.
Mari Wollsch chapter 46 . 5/26/2020
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lemonmelons chapter 36 . 5/25/2020
Oh thanks!
Already I enjoyed this story a lot because Bella is badass. Thanks even more for letting char and Bella rescue the guys!
clickpic chapter 15 . 5/3/2020
Edward is an idiot!
sohelpmegod chapter 46 . 1/19/2020
this is probably my fifth read of this, and every time it is still fucking amazing. please write more of these jasper/bella stories with the major aspect as well. phenomenal, well written, and truly a pleasure to read, each and every time :)
celajwhitney chapter 15 . 10/31/2019
edward has always been a pompous prick, hasn't he?
celajwhitney chapter 10 . 10/31/2019
stupid punk edward.
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