|Reviews for let's light up the world, baby|
| hoping for miracles chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
this is great, okay? Eventhough Mollysander is my Molly, nor Lysander OTP, I find this quite fasinating to read.
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Interesting.. I normally pair Ly with Lucy, and Lorcan with Lils. But this was cool
| revolution rae chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I love it! especially the stanza: "so her lips meet yours in that array of sparks/and maybe things weren't meant to happen this way/but they did, so who's going to fight it?" Lovely:)
| fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
After the reading the first line I was immediately reminded of the Disney's The Little Mermaid - specifically the song "Kiss the Girl." Adorable!
Maybe you could use a different word for "colour", just a few times, because repeating it so many times unfortunately took away some of the magic of the lines.
I loveloveadore these lines:
the pon beneath your faces
and the water just blurs again
so her lips meet yours in that array of sparks
and maybe things weren't meant to happen this way
but they did, so who's going to fight it?
Just simpl s!
| renzhie chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I have to laugh at this:
(sorry, Rose && Scorpius, you're too cliché)
I adore you right now... XD
this was a brilliant freeverse
You broke the cliche, again. D
And I likeloveadore MollyLysander!
You put my freeverse into shame, Mad. XD
This was not /fair/
| centralperks chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
No, this was really cute! I hate cliches, and this was the least cliched-next gen I have seen in awhile
The idea was great, I loved the whole black and white and colours thing that went with this.. good job!
| haha chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
oooh, not bad! I like how you put Lysander in slytherin- made him more 'interesting' :)