Reviews for let's light up the world, baby
hoping for miracles chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
this is great, okay? Eventhough Mollysander is my Molly, nor Lysander OTP, I find this quite fasinating to read.
kingslayers chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Interesting.. I normally pair Ly with Lucy, and Lorcan with Lils. But this was cool
revolution rae chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I love it! especially the stanza: "so her lips meet yours in that array of sparks/and maybe things weren't meant to happen this way/but they did, so who's going to fight it?" Lovely:)

Rae
fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
After the reading the first line I was immediately reminded of the Disney's The Little Mermaid - specifically the song "Kiss the Girl." Adorable!

Maybe you could use a different word for "colour", just a few times, because repeating it so many times unfortunately took away some of the magic of the lines.

I loveloveadore these lines:

the pon beneath your faces

and the water just blurs again

/and/

so her lips meet yours in that array of sparks

and maybe things weren't meant to happen this way

but they did, so who's going to fight it?

Just simpl s!
renzhie chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
First, Mad...

I have to laugh at this:

(sorry, Rose && Scorpius, you're too cliché)

I adore you right now... XD

Second,

this was a brilliant freeverse

You broke the cliche, again. D

And I likeloveadore MollyLysander!

Third,

You put my freeverse into shame, Mad. XD

This was not /fair/

ROFLMAO

Great job!
centralperks chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
No, this was really cute! I hate cliches, and this was the least cliched-next gen I have seen in awhile

The idea was great, I loved the whole black and white and colours thing that went with this.. good job!
haha chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
oooh, not bad! I like how you put Lysander in slytherin- made him more 'interesting' :)