|Reviews for The Blood Sprite|
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2015
Please continue the story Please
| Love Faith Embers chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
Ok... Harry has brothers? Can you explain that?
| Madam Luna chapter 2 . 1/10/2015
i do hope you update soon this is a very promising story
| Tristi Lynne chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
lol great story
| SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Hahaha oh wow
| thankchaosforspellcheck chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Good story, but Bloom's the princess of Sparks, not Domino.
| Jessica Jayme Bell chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
| Jessica Jayme Bell chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
wtf this is funny
| Laslus chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
O.o this was SO COOL
really weird but i LOVE IT o.o
really LOVE IT
| Loony the Lothlorien Huntress chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
Im falling in love with this story I think it is very unique
| Gloxinia chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
Hello! I would like to say that this idea is quite clever and I did not see that coming, I thought that it was going to be different but it was nonetheless good.
I do have some suggestions though...
you have people talking you should make different paragraphs for each different person speaking,
"Let's all get some sleep" Bloom suggested, "Oh Harry" Hermione said as she reached the door, "yeah?" Harry asked, "your wings are very beautiful you know" she said,
"Let's all get some sleep" Bloom suggested, "Oh Harry" Hermione said as she reached the door.
"yeah?" Harry asked.
"Your wings are very beautiful you know" she said,
that comment about his wings in the story '(A/N there is a link to a picture of Harry's wings on my profile).' Broke the way it was, and instead of being smooth reading it broke the flow. Instead you should write it as a note at the very end.
Those are some little things I noticed but the idea and the writing was not bad, and I thank you for putting it up, it was a nice read. Please keep up the reading!