Reviews for The Power of Loyalty
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
Nicely done. Would it be too much for black to have a life and family, as the other two have or had? I suppose so...
excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
Of course Snape is confused. Nobody's ever thanked him before. (you know, like nobody did in canon).

Good chapter.
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
Ah, now it makes sense. Dumbledore would do anything to rescue Harry. One hopes he doesn't leave Snape behind...
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Albus actually risked himself in battle? Wow.
Naniwoiutennen chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Oh my, this story was brilliant. It was so beautifully done! Keep up the great work.
P.S. Sorry I didnt log in, but I did sign with my screenname :P
34Deleted12 chapter 4 . 5/3/2011

The writing in this is incredible. The way you can work out which character is which without naming any is fantastic - it builds up the tension even more.

Simply amazing fic! :)
TheWildMage chapter 4 . 4/18/2011
Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed the symbolism, and really liked how you incorporated their eye colors into the chapter names. Your style's a bit too flowery for my taste, but it's reminiscent of old Norse tales - very cool. Not something that you read everyday!
Kitty O chapter 4 . 2/6/2011
I really like how you did this. Very powerful, and the eyecolor thing was amazing. This was so well written. But I wanna know what happened to Remus!

Bad voldie...
misundersnape chapter 4 . 2/5/2011

I loved this.

I had never thought of these key player's eye colours in quite this way before, but it just seems so obvious now that you have pointed it out this way in this fic.

Lovely ending... if only.

Clearly you have more compassion in your 'typing fingers' than the esteemed canon author.

Great job, thanks for sharing.

AliceInCrazyland15 chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
This was a really interesting fic. I enjoyed it emensly.
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 4 . 2/3/2011
That was intense. BAM!
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
This went from painful to takes an amazing author to convey such emotions in such short writings.
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Poor snape...
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Thatt was amazing so detailed!
attyfan chapter 4 . 2/3/2011
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