|Reviews for Why to Continue|
| percab8531 chapter 16 . 4/24
Hey are u gonna finish this?
| percab8531 chapter 14 . 4/24
I love this chapter so much! It's so funnyyyyy!
| percab8531 chapter 12 . 4/24
Wait but in the end of brotherhood didn't they use the philosophers stone to fix havocs legs?
| geme1 chapter 14 . 4/21
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 15 . 1/6
This was a fun read. At first I was kinda shifty, like, is this gonna turn serious? is Ed gonna be to arrogant and not funny?
But it was rather amusing. xD I wish the ending was drawn out a bit longer, with a more closed up conclusion to the plot... but it was a fun brisk read! xD haha
Neat work. :D
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 14 . 1/6
I just love how they get all banged up, but it's normal... yep... they completely recover by the next panel... xD
hahahaha! And everyone just storms in to get him. xD
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 10 . 1/6
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 1/6
Technically, you do not have to say "check." Well, it's generally considered rude or disruptive if you are at a tournament, because of the thinking and all, and if they're decent chess players at all, they'd NOTICE that they're in check... :P but you can say it in casual games since it's just a courtesy- it can be helpful if you're talking and stuff while you play, since one can get distracted... haha. Ah, do what works for both of you in casual games. :P HOWEVER, no matter whether you say it or not, the other person HAS to move legally. i.e. something that gets them OUT of check. If they make an illegal move (one that doesn't get them out), then point it out, and then they have to take it back and make another move with the SAME piece. If they can't actually make a legal move with the piece they tried to move, then there's no penalty, and they simply select another piece to take their move over...
...seems complicated, but in essence: saying "check" is a courtesy. The other person should have noticed that they are in check, and they have to move accordingly, regardless of you saying it. :P
| Baby Fawn chapter 16 . 12/28/2014
You should use alternit since number 2 that one really cracked me up and more umbrige frog bashing more tempers and try and being the rest of them with him with truth spits him out the other side
| Irowael chapter 16 . 11/22/2014
| rednightmares chapter 4 . 11/18/2014
O.M.G. THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ (AND PROBABLY WILL READ).
| The Forgotten Guardian chapter 13 . 9/21/2014
the answer for all story plots ...send the houe wife
| KK chapter 16 . 7/28/2014
I really liked the first half of it but the second half seemed rushed to me. I know that there is nothing that the FMAB group did in here that they honestly wouldn't have done but I would have liked more challenge or at least story in the second part. It all seemed to go too quickly from Ed is an 'amnesiac' who is paying for his time in a different world... actually that would have helped the story if Ed had to spend a certain amount of time in HP world due to the cost. Though I have to admit the end parts were funny they just didn't seem to mesh with the beginning.
| bluesonicblast chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
...*mind blows up twice*...I lurv it
| JuviasPOV chapter 16 . 7/13/2014
GOD THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD. And smile. And smirk. And fangirl. And laugh even more because Edward is rude and he's awesome and all the people that came through the Gate and ASDFGHJKL
I'm stomach sick atm and keeps throwing up, so this made me feel a lot better. Thank you.
Also, would you mind doing more scenes with Amestrians/ Xingese storming the Great Hall? Like, when Ed is eating with WinryHermioneAlphonseHarryRon, Lan Fan and Ling turn up hanging from the walls or something, or maybe General Armstrong storming the place with a tank? (Maybe not a tank. But you get it. She rules.) ALL IN ALL THE AMESTRIXINGESE PEOPLE BEING AWESOME AND CRAZY. LOVE CHA