Reviews for Passages
Maico202 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I like this story :D

To be honest, it seems to lack a bit of detail to the world- something I find myself struggling with too on my own stories, but other than that I could feel the adventure in this story after the young Torin and Ardocc set off on their own! Their relationship is very brief but interesting.. I hope you continue.