|Reviews for Indelible Cipher|
| DivineJudgment chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
It's good to see another Leona fic, especially coming from you! I like the concept of this, and I think Felix/Leona is adorable so i'll definitely be keeping an eye on this.
The only advice I would give is to extend your paragraphs. I would recommend looking at your fanfic now that you can read it on here. You'll notice that there's about one line and then a break, one line, break, etc. It makes it difficult to read at times, at least for me. Or it could just be my OCD kicking in XD