Reviews for Two
Guest chapter 8 . 6/3
I guess I don't even understand the point of the lemon with bella. Supply and demand ya know? The market is flooded with Edward, he'd give it up to anyone. So theres nothing special about him doing it with bella, so the lemon was pointless to me.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/3
sinfully delicious my ass, this is gross.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3
So their just gross whores? That's too bad.

I don't want Bella with your version of Edward, hes fucking used up. Can you imagine? He fucks a girl almost every time he needs blood and hes been doing it for 25 years! If the story so far in any indication of how often he eats, its every 3 days. Do you know how many women that would be? He would have already slept with 3000 women and that doesn't even include his number from when he was human.
Lanna chapter 14 . 4/1
Loved this one. Hated J but he's perfectly nasty lol
ImYours1901 chapter 11 . 1/1
Great story, a nice break from the longer fics I’ve been reading recently
readicted chapter 11 . 7/20/2016
Well, this was...dark. lol. Bella seems well-suited for her new life and her new partner. Thanks for sharing.
jk chapter 11 . 6/26/2016
itd be funny if bella found out how he fed...and decided to do the same...even the score as it were...ohhh I bet Edward would be pissed. And he would deserve every fucking second of it
jk chapter 10 . 6/26/2016
I hope bella wakes up with aros power so she can see what Edward REALLY is. How fucking gross he is. I hope she sees, then leaves his ass
jk chapter 7 . 6/26/2016
I wonder if bella would be so excited if she knew that hundreds of other woman have been on that same dick...I feel really sorry for bella, that she doesn't know that what she really should be doing is pouring gas into her pussy and lighting it up with a match...cause that shits ruined now!
jk chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
Edward is fucking disgusting...hes already fucked and killed what? a few hundred woman? NO WOMAN would want to be with a used up whore like this
jk chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
sooo they go around fucking and then killing woman? And just because Edward didn't do it tonight he DOES do it?
Why would anyone want bella to be with a gross whore like this? This isn't something you can fucking take back!
k1942 chapter 12 . 12/1/2015
I really didn't like Jasper by the end of this story!
k1942 chapter 11 . 12/1/2015
It doesn't surprise me that Bella is taking to this new life like a duck to water. I'll bet she and Edward have a lot more fun together than he and Jasper ever did!
k1942 chapter 10 . 12/1/2015
Frankly, I'm glad Edward destroyed Jasper! That controlling habit of his was beginning to really be annoying! I wonder what immortality will do for Bella?
k1942 chapter 9 . 12/1/2015
Hurry, Edward, you might be in time to stop him if you really fly!
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