|Reviews for I loathe you too, Darling|
| Mrs. Teddy Lupin chapter 6 . 7h
I quite liked the story. Short and sweet, although Minerva was very out of character! I didn't mind that though.
| RhodaBush chapter 6 . 6/26/2017
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/18/2017
I'm a little late in reading this. I hope you can still see new reviews. Well done-a very fun story. Best of all it reminds me of a couple I know. Coincidentally, they are both French! And they have the Greatest 'how they met' story-kind of like HG/SS here.
My friend, She had just finished college & was visiting her uncle in Paris. Her uncle said, "You need to get out of the house & meet someone. I know-our company is having a big corporate dinner & I have 2 single guys in my dept. I'll get one of them to take you. Which one do you want?She said "what are they like? He said, "Well, one is very good-looking & has a laid-back personality. The other is ugly & spits fire." She said "Well, I want the ugly one who spits fire!" And that was the man she married! True story! I like that Hermione also wanted 'the ugly one who spits fire!' I love how poor, repressed rejection-complex Severus goes kicking/screaming but mans-up & gets his lady at last.
| Angelus chapter 6 . 6/5/2015
English speaking or not, you did a great job with this story, really. I do wish he apologised to her for telling her he hated her,I know its the point of your title but I think for it to make sense she should have also said she loathes him in the end
| just me 5000 chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
Great job. I would never have guessed English is not your native language.
| SocietysSake chapter 6 . 4/26/2014
For not being an English speaker by nature, you are very good. Your English is by far better than my students, and they've been in the states their entire lives. Thank you for the wonderful story line.
| Rose chapter 6 . 7/24/2013
Hey! Don't know how to speak to you english or french ;)
As a frenchy, je préfère utiliser ma langue natale :p
J'ai bien aimé ta petite fic comme bcp d'autres, soit dit en passant ;)
Ca aurait peut-être été bien de voir plus de leur dispute dans un chapitre supplémentaire mais je ne suis même pas sûre! Peut-être que ça aurait été de trop, rallongeant trop le début ... Enfin ça aurait été juste pour le fun de les voir se traiter comme on a vu avec le nez de Snape et "frigid bitch" ? ;)
| MaryVampy08 chapter 6 . 4/16/2013
"Mmh… And I certainly don't want to make love to you, Hermione."
I loved that part. xD
It was amazing. Plus, you did a good job since english is not your first language.
| nancy loves harry potter chapter 5 . 2/25/2013
I really enjoyed this, I really liked how you wrote Hermione and Severus. Your English is better than a lot of native speakers! :)
| Gryffindork11 chapter 6 . 12/12/2012
Your English is very good :) I couldn't tell that it is a foreign language to you. I loved this story, Severus was amazing ;)
| Authyme chapter 6 . 7/15/2012
lots of fun
| Cleminem chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
I really like this so far. You're doing exceptionally well for writing in a foreign language. :)
| Krounas chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
| Infusiion chapter 6 . 2/25/2012
I can tell you usually stick to fan fiction, as this felt perhaps a little shorter or a little more rushed than it should have been (but I do the exact same thing when I try to write anything other than one shots so I understand!). But you should have more confidence in your grasp of the English language! If you didn't mention anything about English not being your native tongue I wouldn't have noticed. So well done ;)
Anyways I enjoyed this, and their attraction to each other being morphed into hatred and passionate fighting certainly seems true to their characters! And I really do love a jealous Snape ;)
| omg chapter 6 . 1/1/2012
I absolutely loooooooove this, your writing style is amazing, i love the wy u portrayed the characters they were spot on! I could see it happening like that! I wish it was longer though and SEQUEL?