|Reviews for Off Balance|
| darkbangle chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
"It is a good thing you are quite skilled in walking on your hands then." I love that line. XD You write a seriously sexy Hatter, and a lovely, mischievous Alice.
| dogsrplayful chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Mmm. Nice writing. I rather do like your stories. :D
| Your Oasis chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Aww that was lovely. Short but sweet and hints of lime. :)
| Niphuria chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
"Ah like thaim bare," he explained, his finger continuing to draw lazy circles on her. "But A'd like thaim in hoshen juist as weel."
"But," she began to complain. But this was so nice! His hand, her knee: why would she want stockings in the way?
"Tho the outcome wad be the same: A'd tak thaim aff ye."
LOL! Lovely! These lines...it just shows Tarrant sees a present inside stockings, I think. Dress her in them, and then "tak thaim aff." Just as I imagine he'd like to make her dresses and then... *ahem* HOT!
A swing is just the thing for such Naughty Hatter Thoughts! ;)
You write so charmingly and keep the spirit of playfulness here as well as romance and eroticism. Nicely done!
| Kogoma10 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I love this. It was really cute and made me squee multiple times. This really put me in a good mood.
| Erminie chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
cute and sensual, I loved it!
| deathroman13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Very nice one-shot :)
Cute,I like it :D