|Reviews for Better Than A Hallelujah|
| IantojJackh chapter 7 . 3/14/2011
Very moving chapter. Great emotions here. Too bad Carson never got the closure he deserved. Awesome job. Looking forward to more from you.
| Lithane chapter 7 . 3/14/2011
Well done. Great insight into that last letter. Hope to see more of your work...;-)
| ladygris chapter 7 . 3/14/2011
An excellent look into what Clone Carson must have been thinking before going into stasis. I like how you bring up the realization that, while he's not the original, he can still do something for his mother. That he can write the letter the other Carson didn't get a chance to write.
Well done. ;-)
| ladygris chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
Wow. . . .I'm not entirely sure what to say to this one. I believe it would take a situation like this for Rodney to start thinking about God, but I don't know that he'd go THIS far.
Good writing, but definitely not my cup of tea for this chapter.
| Lithane chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
Sending review by PM...;-)
| BrnEyesTX chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
this was wonderful.. you wrote rodney with such depth.. I just never see that in him.. well done.
| IantojJackh chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
Amazing chapter. Great insight into Rodney during what had to be a dark time for him.
| Lithane chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
Ouch. I love the way you have woven the story in such a way that all in your story have not only had the opportunity to come to Jesus, but have. Atlantis saved, a pleasent thought to be sure. Great job with who is probably my favorite character on the show.
| Lithane chapter 4 . 2/9/2011
How do I review...It only the our loved ones who have known the way could remember he grace, even if it takes a "death-bed" experience. I especially liked Ford's piece, well done.
| Lithane chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
And which of us on this journey hasn't taken the time to ask why me? Wow...;-)
| Lithane chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Great visual. Anyone who has served and been behind enemy lines would be able to relate. Good work...;-)
| Lithane chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Very well written. It would seem only natural to get a very strong spiritual woman, like Teyla, the opportunity to know Jesus like we do. From a Biblical stand-point, there is nothing better than a heart felt "Hallelujah", but I do understand your point of view. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
| ladygris chapter 5 . 2/7/2011
I love the last line of the story: I will bring you Home. It is that promise that keeps many of us going through those hard days. This isn't the end, it's just a pitstop along the road to our destination as believers. This was a beautiful representation of that, as John struggled to accept what happened in the episode "Doppleganger." I really enjoyed it. Great work!
| BrnEyesTX chapter 5 . 2/7/2011
these are wonderful.. all of these, what a great idea.
| IantojJackh chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
Another moving chapter. Great job.