|Reviews for Naruto no Enton|
| PCheshire chapter 10 . 1/16
please don't give us a surprise of Haku actually being a girl later... some would probably be frothing at the mouth xD
this is awesome
how about a rainbow attack lol flames with different colors
| Cerulean Knight chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
Itachi learned the Hiraishin, really?!
| xyz chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Yay! Sarutobi is growing a backbone . well done so far! :)
| Diablo Largato chapter 10 . 5/14/2013
All I can say is I want MOAR! lol, great job on the story thus far keep up the great work. If you need help let me know I am always willing to lend a hand.
| hk chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
yo when writing even if it is for such a purpose as this always indent it makes it look better and will make it flow better
| froger495 chapter 10 . 11/11/2012
cant wait for the next chapter.
| Divine Fury chapter 10 . 10/29/2012
Hey, I liked this story so far, a lot actually. So I figured, maybe I can help a bit with addressing Mei and Haku. Now, I realize Haku and Mei are soft spots, but as Naruto was raised, even though he is naturally kind, I believe it would be best to ease into a soft spot. I think Haku has already started this when she/he asked Naruto about himself as an individual, but there needs to be more. Something that makes Naruto see Haku as something to care for, or someone to "love". There needs to be back up or it leaves some people questioning how it even happened.
Next, I love the way you write. There are basically no mistakes, and add that on to the fact that your usage of the english vocabulary is astounding. The way you form the words together is amazing, and the way it seems to fit with the theme is even better. But, in the coming chapter, even if it is quite irritable, you may need to add some backstory. Now Zabuza and Mei met, la di da, now they fight together. That doesn't work, you may need to add, maybe even a full chapter, dedicated to Mei and Zabuza's backstory. Maybe some reasons for them and reasons for their rebelion.
I'd also like to give credit to the Beta, it was great and I feel like whatever they did may have helped the story. Maybe they even helped the plot development like I'm trying to, in which I say they did a great job. Just keep writing, and make sure not to give up. You have developed quite the fan base, if you will, and I'm proud to say I can add myself to it. Hell, maybe you could help me with my stories as well, if I make any. I need encouragement, for some reason I can never finish anything, and when I do, I feel like I half a**ed it. So, maybe someone helping me with my ideas and plot development may make a change, so I would greatly appreciate a helping hand, which I would return of course. Thank you for writing this, and keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter.
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 10 . 10/6/2012
Is Haku a guy or girl in this story man!?
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 9 . 10/6/2012
Why couldn't Yuugao get a wooden leg from Suna's puppet corps? And is Suna even in the war effort as Konoha's ally?
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
The ebnd of this chapter seemed a bit too rushed.
| silverfoxkurama chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
i loved it it was great i don't know if you take suggestion or not but have u seen one piece if so u have ace he has powers over fire maybe u can use some of his movies or u got Roy from fullmetal and u got natsu from fairy tail maybe u can use some of there attacks and i know naruto made that fire sword but what a bout giving naruto a real sword u can make a Special type of sword like i don't he gets some chakra metal and he can slowly i don't know like soak it in his fire and wind chakra so the sword can get use to his chakra and he can like put a blood seal oni t so ony his blod can use it or like if he is knocked out his sword can like go back ind his chakra or something so his allies can move him without getting burned by his sword it can be like Yamamoto-Genryusai sword from bleach just wanted to let u know if u don't but u should lol
| Narutoenthusiast chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
Interesting story. It's the first time I have seen a story with itachi as godaime hokage. Coming to think about it, it actually makes sense that sarutobi would respect him for his sacrifice for the good of the village. Keep it up!
| insane devill chapter 10 . 4/19/2012
very good story the danzos death was very shocking and its not easy to shock me but it was a good scean and was executed perfectly but I don’t understand why hasn’t naruto been told about his heritage and will any of narutos classmate have any plot time? What about garra ( I love that guy)
| Zero The Chance chapter 10 . 4/14/2012
Uh about Haku...in chapter 4 you confirmed that she would be female yet now in this chapter you have been switching between an "Androgynous boy" and "genderless figure". So is Haku still going to be female and just pretending to be a boy or is he just a guy who looks like a girl?
| AnAddictedReader chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
So I'm guessing this is yaoi?