Reviews for Naruto no Enton
Tobee chapter 3 . 2/25
OHHHHH
mansg598 chapter 5 . 1/4
Nice story so far. You have quite a few original ideas especially the Itachi becoming Hokage idea so kudos to you for that. Anyway keep up the good work and with that I head off to read the next chapter
thestorymaker2 chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
Homesteading know why youn stopped writing this so far it's really good
drake999 chapter 10 . 8/17/2014
This story...has been the only good naruto story ive read in sooo long (that hasnt already been read)...thank you!

Love the storyline, and how you made konoha...awesome! anyway, you should keep writing this, even if it wont be on here for another half year or so...at least it'd be on here sometime,
Darkness Consumes the Souls chapter 10 . 8/15/2014
a little rushed, but overall great ideas and descent execution.

though the over 2 years since an update...

really...not enough of the story has been written to truly review it...but it has great potential...though...again...a little rushed...after writing you should wait a little. then reread your chapter/story, it would be much much better with just a paragraph or two added throughout the story, but again you are doing pretty well. Definitely above average...way above...considering the shit on this site from 12 y/o girls trying to write guys and writing in 'dickless' guys
Darkness Consumes the Souls chapter 3 . 8/15/2014
...ninja...secrets...caution...logic...none of these describe chapter 4.
Darkness Consumes the Souls chapter 4 . 8/15/2014
...having one wife/partner...is a very western new modern outlook on life...and in actuality you have no idea what women actually want, because society tells people what they 'should' want, and just like the sheep we are, we follow blindly. having such a closed mind...is extremely disappointing, especially on a site with a banner of "Unleash your imagination"

but even more importantly...naruto is based completely off Japanese culture(not really shippuden(but by that point all the naruto writers saw, was the massive money sent to them by simple americans)) and you havent even deigned to even glance at any foreign culture at all if your so entrenched in US bigotry.
kingrobert84 chapter 10 . 5/15/2014
doin awesome man whens update?
kingrobert84 chapter 6 . 5/14/2014
naruto is a stealth freak he can sneak in anywhere and the best thing is its natural
kingrobert84 chapter 5 . 5/14/2014
isnt it kage or shadow? and jariya was an expert almost master now the uzumaki and yondaime where masters and the uzumaki took master to whole new level one of the reasons they where killed
Nerfhearder69 chapter 10 . 4/11/2014
Hope the home sitch is improved! Love your work! Didn't Mei have a cousin or something?
Nerfhearder69 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
Whoa! Definitely took that right at Alberkerky! Damn! Can't wait to see what this departure does!
sg2006 chapter 10 . 3/12/2014
Great fic! love the entei no yaroi!
PCheshire chapter 10 . 1/16/2014
please don't give us a surprise of Haku actually being a girl later... some would probably be frothing at the mouth xD
this is awesome
how about a rainbow attack lol flames with different colors
Cerulean Knight chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
Itachi learned the Hiraishin, really?!
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