Reviews for Fireheart's Betrayal
Guest chapter 3 . 7/18
I loved it
megalucarioX chapter 3 . 7/7
This is very exciting. Excellent detail. I hope this is going to be updated soon.
Fallentail chapter 3 . 5/26
Wow! This is a great story! Lots of great detail. Way to go Fireheart blame it on Greystripe!
666 chapter 3 . 2/6
THIS MUST CONTINUE also why do i get the feeling that the "timid loner" could be smudge? Hes timid but hes a kittypet. Can't be Barley because hes not timid, just old... idk who it is so you should update plz, i understand if you got tons of life to deal with but plz thanks :D
Umbreon is so awesome chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
Awesome story...
Cheetahtwo chapter 3 . 3/30/2014
CONTINUE! PLZ! SOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOD!
Blazingnyancat chapter 3 . 2/16/2014
Wow, Fireheart i'm not impressed with you...
o chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
FIREHEART HOW COULD YYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU! XD EVEN IF I KNOW ITS NOT REAL
Cant.Delete.Account. HELP chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
So? I don't think that Tigerclaw should get 9 lives. Then he'd lie about it. Fireheart or Graystripe deputy. Besides those ideas, it's awesome. I just read the first 3 chapters and I love it. I'm gonna follow this story! Please put up chapter 4 soon. PLEASE!
Mcnuggets4lyfe chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Nice. Continue soon!
abandonedaccount37289 chapter 3 . 2/2/2011
Awesome Story! Update Soon!
abandonedaccount37289 chapter 3 . 2/2/2011
Awesome Story! Update Soon!