Reviews for Nobody's Heart
crazychick1313 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
pizz-a-truth chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I love that you wrote a poem- I would go back and read it out loud (edit it a-little) so that it flows a-litle better. The length is a-little long, you might want to make it shorter for the audience bc after a certain point no mater how amazing it is-it just starts to drag on. become of this it just becomes less interesting for people to read. I hope you continue writing poetry