Reviews for Broken
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
This was really good I enjoyed it a lot
Imagine What Could Happen chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I really liked this. I think you captured it just right. :)
GEandThree chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
GE: That was a pretty good insider look on the "heartless". I liked it!

One: But..your sentence structure was a bit choppy.

Two: Maybe it could have been longer?

Three: I still liked it a lot though! This is definately a great story. Keep writing!

GE and Three!