Reviews for Lifeless Living
Icy-Windbreeze chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
A bit quick but...very cute nonetheless and I liked the happy ending
DannyDeeDanny chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I like the "Clockwork Orange" ish writing at the beginning,

May not seem like much. I am a 25 year old reading stories about seemingly eighteen year olds.

But I LOVE your writing style.

Please keep practicing.
RosaCam chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
ah, a delightful story. thank you for sharing. :-)
chum-sa chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Oh i like it!
Pochako chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Love it, and I'm not just saying it because it's your first fic and I'm trying to be nice... I like the way it is written and the story behind it all. You portrayed their emotions very well. The only criticism that I have is that once you revealed who The Woman was you didn't need to keep calling her that, but even that wasn't that bad.

Good job, and I look forward to reading more works from you.
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Sounds like a good week to me.
MidnightWinterNeige chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Aww :) My heart gave a happy little sigh when I finished reading this. Some good old fashion sweet Shiznat loving 3

The way you wrote the story was interesting.I wasn't sure who was who at first. I liked it :)

Thanks for the story.
Raven L. Prince chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
As someone who used to work the off-shifts, I found the story touching.
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