|Reviews for Lifeless Living|
| DannyDeeDanny chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I like the "Clockwork Orange" ish writing at the beginning,
May not seem like much. I am a 25 year old reading stories about seemingly eighteen year olds.
But I LOVE your writing style.
Please keep practicing.
| RosaCam chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
ah, a delightful story. thank you for sharing. :-)
| chum-sa chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Oh i like it!
| Pochako chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Love it, and I'm not just saying it because it's your first fic and I'm trying to be nice... I like the way it is written and the story behind it all. You portrayed their emotions very well. The only criticism that I have is that once you revealed who The Woman was you didn't need to keep calling her that, but even that wasn't that bad.
Good job, and I look forward to reading more works from you.
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Sounds like a good week to me.
| MidnightWinterNeige chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Aww :) My heart gave a happy little sigh when I finished reading this. Some good old fashion sweet Shiznat loving 3
The way you wrote the story was interesting.I wasn't sure who was who at first. I liked it :)
Thanks for the story.
| Raven L. Prince chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
As someone who used to work the off-shifts, I found the story touching.