Reviews for 13: Beginnings
Shades.of.Peppermint chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
So I know I've told you this before, but I love the way you write Axel - he's a creeper, definitely, but entertaining enough that I don't hate him for it. And as much as I love your OCs, I also really like watching the game characters interact on their own. This does a good job showing how we get from "don't leave, I'll miss you" to boss fight to on Sunset Hill with 'Ansem' and Nami. Who, incidentally, you also did a good job with. Nami is adorable, and my only complaints about 'Ansem' are that you still give him a Keyblade prematurely ("that accursed Keyblade") and that there's not enough of him - and that's more a problem with my sanity than with your story -;

Oh, and I think it was easier to follow with some kind of section break, but that's really the only complaint I'd have. Just, please don't let Axel do anything horrible to Nami?
TwilightSky15 chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/1/2011

P.S: You used a scene from the Final Mix from Kingdom Hearts II, didn't you?