Reviews for All Over Me
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I liked that his attraction to her grew into so much more. That she'd been dreaming about them being together for moths, was nice to learn. Very sexy ending that created their beginning.
Lafemmevegeta chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Nice hot one shot!
missmariaeuge chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I think i shivered just like Edward did when Bella said "I want you... all over me", omg.
I really liked it! Thanks :)
Abaire chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
So hot. What a shame that it was so short! But great scene.
CullensTwiMistress chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
hey, there was plot here! and a lil smut... hot dancing UST... BUT THERE WAS PLOT, dammit! reminded me a bit of one of my OS, lol
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
fab story that was so hot!
MissJanuary chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Found this little ditty over at the lemonade stand. Thanks for a fun read. ~MissJanuary
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Found on the lemonade stand very hot and steamy
Twiggalina chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Great Oneshot!
Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Damn, you should def continue this. Great writing sweets!
Edmazing chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Oh, I really liked this. Love that it starts with his watching. His appreciating. His wanting.

Loved that after he realized he wanted her and had her in his bed he listened instead of jumping her. I can only imagine the fluttered mess she would've been. *sigh*

Unf. And the remembering of her likes. And those demonstrations. Whoa. So sexy and so right.

And finally, I loved how confident and sexy Bella was. Being selective doesn't have to equal being a prude.

Great job!

MarLea Pie chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Damn - car sex is SO FRIGGING hot!

Yummy goodness.

Thanks for sharing!

Fanfichardcore chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I loved this. It was so hot!
robsessed1123 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
gah. this waz ungh! thx bb
romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
this was sooo hot I loved it! ;)
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