|Reviews for the blurred lines of our lives|
| Ka-tay's mind chapter 1 . 4/23
Short, sweet, and pretty fitting for a pair like them. Nicely done :)
| notsolimpbizkit chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Very impressive. An excellent fic and in my view, your best. Its short but has great charisma, from the eyecatching summary to the subtle characterisations, just brilliant!
The only thing i didn't like was the extra descriptions in the brackets: ... Both gymleaders (battlers) ...
I thought it broke the flow of the story; it made me go wha-? (maybe its just me being a moron lol) so yeah...
Still a top work either way
| MooseBlanket chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I love your style, the way you write... it's lovely. It's hard, I think, to write really short stories, because with so few words it's difficult to make an impact. But this is perfect. I love this line in particular: "He is just a boy, with blue-blue eyes, and she is just a girl, with a ringing laugh, and they are in love." This story is beautiful.
| yootena chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
This was adorable! I love these two so much. :)
| Made of Honor chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Very simple and short yet endearingly sweet. Loved it!
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Awww. This one was so sweet.
| H3art Star chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
OMG You wrote more stories where was i
But any way it was so sweet with a cherry on top *v*
i love it :D
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 2/2/2011