Reviews for Friend in Need
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Cool
CraftyNotepad chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Cute. No need for you to apologize for the ending. It was fine.

The story lack movement. Not energy, per se, but highs and lows. Yes, there's the disagreement in the opening, but their impasse creates a plateau, and it's a plateau which carries throughout the story, crying out for drama, surprise, the possibility of failure.

Best

CraftyNotepad

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ImJessieTR chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
This was a really good addition to the Thornoid plot. It was in character and flawlessly transitioned in between scenes. :)