Reviews for Friend in Need
Bobby breschard chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
I loved this story the characters were a great hit and the new ones are a little off with Robbie and why does he call spike scooter is that a nickname in teen years ? next sarkey might be back with her mate showing the sinclairs their own cavilings and with the other cavilings in their cave babysitting them . After theses years of being friend with them so this might be a gift to them in return that's all done.
VickyT36 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
This was nice.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
CraftyNotepad chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Cute. No need for you to apologize for the ending. It was fine.

The story lack movement. Not energy, per se, but highs and lows. Yes, there's the disagreement in the opening, but their impasse creates a plateau, and it's a plateau which carries throughout the story, crying out for drama, surprise, the possibility of failure.



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ImJessieTR chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
This was a really good addition to the Thornoid plot. It was in character and flawlessly transitioned in between scenes. :)