|Reviews for Affannato|
| bruxabrvxa chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
This is the first good piece of Fringe fanfiction that I find on . Honest to god. I'm going to check the rest of your stuff!
I love piano, and I LOVE when people describe music in their stories, and I *LOVE* Peter, so... What's not to love on this fic? P
I honestly think Peter wouldn't feel too much haunted by his killings right now - I do believe the machine has taken over him at that point, and my guess is this is really going to be a burden to him later on, if he gets rid of the device's influence.
But you used a strong point here, which is Olivia. I think right now he's more concerned about what she'll think if she ever finds out than feeling guilty for the act itself.
To me, Olivia is the thing that can keep him from being completely taken over by the machine.
| wjobsessed chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Well-written but sad.
He could have avoided that future high price and he knows it.
There's alot of examples of reciprocity in that episode.
I hope that the good in Olivia will win out and draw out the good that is now buried, in Peter.
| Mireya Cristina chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Absolutely beautiful. I'm speechless. ;) Keep up the good work!